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courageuse19

Dec. 22, 2022

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Writing Challenge, Day 82

Today is the 82nd day of my daily English challenge. Today my sister and I went out together at supermarket. We bought vegetable, fruits, cheese, chocolat, and yaourt for my nephew and my nieces. Despite I'm sick but I am so excited to receive them.

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Writing Challenge, Day 82

Today is the 82nd day of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister and I went out together atto the supermarket together.

This is usually the order in which we say things like this.

We bought vegetables, fruits, cheese, chocolate, and yaogurt for my nephew and my nieces.

yum!

Despite I'mbeing sick but I am so excited to receivsee them.

Your sentence is grammatically correct but we don't often use the phrase "to receive guests" very often especially when it comes to receiving family and close friends.

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Well done! Enjoy your time with them and I hope you get better soon!

Today is the 82nd day of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister and I went out toge ther at supermarket together.

We bought vegetables, fruits, cheese, chocolate, and yaogurt for my nephew and my nieces.

Despite I'mbeing sick but, I am so excited to receive them.

You don't need to use "but" since you have "despite" in the beginning of the sentence.

Writing Challenge, Day 82


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Today is the 82nd day of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today my sister and I went out together at supermarket.


Today my sister and I went out toge ther at supermarket together.

Today my sister and I went out together atto the supermarket together.

This is usually the order in which we say things like this.

We bought vegetable, fruits, cheese, chocolat, and yaourt for my nephew and my nieces.


We bought vegetables, fruits, cheese, chocolate, and yaogurt for my nephew and my nieces.

We bought vegetables, fruits, cheese, chocolate, and yaogurt for my nephew and my nieces.

yum!

Despite I'm sick but I am so excited to receive them.


Despite I'mbeing sick but, I am so excited to receive them.

You don't need to use "but" since you have "despite" in the beginning of the sentence.

Despite I'mbeing sick but I am so excited to receivsee them.

Your sentence is grammatically correct but we don't often use the phrase "to receive guests" very often especially when it comes to receiving family and close friends.

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