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courageuse19

Dec. 19, 2022

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Writing Challenge, Day 79

Today is the 79th day of my daily English challenge. I wrote two sentences using " Since" and " For". I hope that I understood.


My sister has been working in the company since 1990 who my father had worked.


My sister traveled to Tunisia for one week.

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Writing Challenge, Day 79

Today is the 79th day of my daily English challenge.

I wrote two sentences each using " Ssince" and " For"for," respectively.

I hope that I am understood.

or

I hope that I am making sense.

"To make sense" is an idiom which is used often in the US.

My sister has been working inat the company since 1990 whoand my father also had worked there.

My sister traveled to Tunisia for one week.

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Good work!

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courageuse19

Dec. 20, 2022

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I hope that I am understood.

Thank you for this information and you your helping.

Today is the 79th day of my daily English challenge.

For a bit more advanced phrasing, try saying: “Today marks the 79th day of my daily English challenge. Personally, I would also capitalize the challenge name to “Daily English Challenge” to really express the idea that it’s a part of my daily routine (not necessary at all).

I wrote two sentences using " Since" and " For".

I hope that I can be understood. OR I hope that this is all understandable.

My sister has been working inat the company since 1990, whoere my father had also worked.

I am not sure if you mean that your father worked at the same company. That’s how I interpreted this sentence.

My sister traveled to Tunisia for one week.

I hope that I understood and used them correctly.

It sounds odd to leave "understood" at the end of the sentence.

My sister has been working in the company since 1990 who my father had worked..

I think you might be trying to say something like "My sister has been working in the same company as my father since 1990" Or "My sister has been working in the company since 1990. My father also worked there." Not sure if you meant either of these but the first part of the sentence is correct

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Good job overall

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courageuse19

Dec. 20, 2022

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My sister has been working in the company since 1990 who my father had worked..

Thank you so much.

When I said my father worked there it means before because my father is dead.

Writing Challenge, Day 79


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Today is the 79th day of my daily English challenge.


Today is the 79th day of my daily English challenge.

For a bit more advanced phrasing, try saying: “Today marks the 79th day of my daily English challenge. Personally, I would also capitalize the challenge name to “Daily English Challenge” to really express the idea that it’s a part of my daily routine (not necessary at all).

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wrote two sentences using " Since" and " For".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wrote two sentences each using " Ssince" and " For"for," respectively.

I hope that I understood.


I hope that I understood and used them correctly.

It sounds odd to leave "understood" at the end of the sentence.

I hope that I can be understood. OR I hope that this is all understandable.

I hope that I am understood.

or I hope that I am making sense. "To make sense" is an idiom which is used often in the US.

My sister has been working in the company since 1990 who my father had worked.


My sister has been working in the company since 1990 who my father had worked..

I think you might be trying to say something like "My sister has been working in the same company as my father since 1990" Or "My sister has been working in the company since 1990. My father also worked there." Not sure if you meant either of these but the first part of the sentence is correct

My sister has been working inat the company since 1990, whoere my father had also worked.

I am not sure if you mean that your father worked at the same company. That’s how I interpreted this sentence.

My sister has been working inat the company since 1990 whoand my father also had worked there.

My sister traveled to Tunisia for one week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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