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Writing Challenge, Day 270

Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Challenge. Today I filmed one recipe video. I'll edit it and put it on Tik Tok.

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes. I know people likely will understand me to say words after another...

Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

Corrections

Writing Challenge, Day 270

Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Challenge.

Today I filmed one recipea cooking video.

I'll edit it and put it on Tik Tok.

In the evening, I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text insome English text.
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

I know people will likely will understand me toif I say one words after another...


Today
, I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

I think this is what you meant?

Writing Challenge, Day 270

Today is day 270 of my (Daily English Writing Challenge / daily English writing Challenge).

You can capitalize if you are focusing on the name of the challenge, or not capitalize if you are focusing on the action.

Today I filmed one recipe video.

I'll edit it and put it on Tik Tok.

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read in a loud voice a little text in English
. I have to practice a lot aloneby myself even if I make many mistakes.

I know people are likely willto understand me (to say words after another...
??)¶

Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

I am not sure about the meaning of the end of the first sentence. Sorry!

Feedback

Wow! 270 days. Great work! I hope you can reach the end of your challenge.

Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Cchallenge.

“challenge” is not a proper noun here

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English out loud.
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

“Aloud” is the other option. Neither is wrong, but “aloud” is older and more formal. People usually only use internet when writing.

I know people likely will understand me tothink I say words after another...


Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

“Say words after another” doesn’t make sense. I think you’re trying to translate an idiom? Also, “understand ___ to” is an older way to say that. Most people now would say “think ___.”

Feedback

You use a lot of very formal or older vocabulary. It feels like you’re writing a letter a hundred years ago. However, I’m American and it looks like you’re using British English, judging from your use of “revised,” so take my words with a grain of salt.

Writing Challenge, Day 270

Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Challenge.

Today I filmed onea recipe video.

I'll edit it and putupload it on Tik Tok.

You could also say "upload" instead of "put".

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English .
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

I know people likely will understand me to say words after another... ¶
the words I am saying...¶

Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

Feedback

Well done! I love how you are consistent in doing this. I hope this year will be the year for me to do a writing challenge in the language I am learning. I hope I helped if it was just a little bit.

I'll edit it and put it on Tik Tok.


I'll edit it and putupload it on Tik Tok.

You could also say "upload" instead of "put".

I'll edit it and put it on Tik Tok.

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In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.


In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English .
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text in English out loud.
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

“Aloud” is the other option. Neither is wrong, but “aloud” is older and more formal. People usually only use internet when writing.

In the evening I revised two English lessons and I read in a loud voice a little text in English
. I have to practice a lot aloneby myself even if I make many mistakes.

In the evening, I revised two English lessons and I read a loud voice a little text insome English text.
I have to practice a lot alone even if I make many mistakes.

I know people likely will understand me to say words after another... Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.


I know people likely will understand me to say words after another... ¶
the words I am saying...¶

Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

I know people likely will understand me tothink I say words after another...


Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

“Say words after another” doesn’t make sense. I think you’re trying to translate an idiom? Also, “understand ___ to” is an older way to say that. Most people now would say “think ___.”

I know people are likely willto understand me (to say words after another...
??)¶

Today I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

I am not sure about the meaning of the end of the first sentence. Sorry!

I know people will likely will understand me toif I say one words after another...


Today
, I also read the corrections from people who corrected my writing yesterday.

I think this is what you meant?

Writing Challenge, Day 270


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Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Challenge.


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Today is day 270 of my daily English writing Cchallenge.

“challenge” is not a proper noun here

Today is day 270 of my (Daily English Writing Challenge / daily English writing Challenge).

You can capitalize if you are focusing on the name of the challenge, or not capitalize if you are focusing on the action.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I filmed one recipe video.


Today I filmed onea recipe video.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I filmed one recipea cooking video.

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