Today I decided to write on this website again after a long absence in this website.

In this new year 2024.,

It sounds weird to me with the 2024. Maybe you could put it in parentheses like "In this new year (2024)," but that's unnecessary unless you really want readers in the future to know what year you're talking about.

I would personally just write "This year, I hope to..." or "In 2024, I hope to..."

I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday.

I know it is not easy to learn alone, but I am really excited to go aheaproceed.

The phrase "go ahead" here wants something after it, like "go ahead and do it," so the sentence felt like it was unfinished the first time I read it.

I puset many goals for this new year, soand I am proud of myself what I did in taccomplished last year.

The first clause doesn't explain the second clause, so "so" doesn't work.

"did" is ok. I changed it because it feels a little vague (even though the context makes it clear). "I accomplished something" is more descriptive and emotionally fitting than "I did something." Other good options are "achieved" and "was able to do."

Today I decided to write again after a long absence infrom this website.

I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday.

I know is not easy to learn alone but I am really excited to go aheadkeep going.

I puthave many goals for this new year, soand I am proud of myself of what I did in the last year.

Today I decided to write again after a long absence infrom this website.

I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday.