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Writing challenge, Day 268

Today is day 268 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I decided to write again after a long absence in this website.

In this new year 2024. I hope to write in English without stop it and continue to practice English everyday.

I know is not easy to learn alone but I am really excited to go ahead. I put many goals for this new year, so I am proud of myself what I did in the last year.

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Writing challenge, Day 268

Today is day 268 of my daily English writing challenge.

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Jan. 7, 2024

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Writing challenge, Day 268

Today is day 268 of my daily English writing challenge.

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courageuse19

Jan. 6, 2024

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I hope to write in English without stop it and continue to practice English everyday.


I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday. I hope to write in English without stopping and continue to practice English everyday.

I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday. I hope to write in English without stopping and continue to practice English everyday.

I hope to write in English without stop itping and continue to practice English everyday. I hope to write in English without stopping and continue to practice English everyday.

I know is not easy to learn alone but I am really excited to go ahead.


I know is not easy to learn alone but I am really excited to go aheadkeep going. I know is not easy to learn alone but I am really excited to keep going.

I know it is not easy to learn alone, but I am really excited to go aheaproceed. I know it is not easy to learn alone, but I am really excited to proceed.

The phrase "go ahead" here wants something after it, like "go ahead and do it," so the sentence felt like it was unfinished the first time I read it.

I put many goals for this new year, so I am proud of myself what I did in the last year.


I puthave many goals for this new year, soand I am proud of myself of what I did in the last year. I have many goals for this new year, and I am proud of myself of what I did in the last year.

I puset many goals for this new year, soand I am proud of myself what I did in taccomplished last year. I set many goals for this new year, and I am proud of what I accomplished last year.

The first clause doesn't explain the second clause, so "so" doesn't work. "did" is ok. I changed it because it feels a little vague (even though the context makes it clear). "I accomplished something" is more descriptive and emotionally fitting than "I did something." Other good options are "achieved" and "was able to do."

Writing challenge, Day 268


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Today is day 268 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Today I decided to write again after a long absence in this website.


Today I decided to write again after a long absence infrom this website. Today I decided to write again after a long absence from this website.

Today I decided to write again after a long absence infrom this website. Today I decided to write again after a long absence from this website.

Today I decided to write on this website again after a long absence in this website. Today I decided to write on this website again after a long absence.

In this new year 2024.


In this new year 2024., In this new year,

It sounds weird to me with the 2024. Maybe you could put it in parentheses like "In this new year (2024)," but that's unnecessary unless you really want readers in the future to know what year you're talking about. I would personally just write "This year, I hope to..." or "In 2024, I hope to..."

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