I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.

I took a shower then I took a rest because my body needed it.

I hope I get a lot of views.

I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.

I took a shower and then I took a rest because my body needed it.

In the afternoon, I revisewed some Spanish lessons.

I think this might be a difference of dialect.

I hope it gets a lot of views.

Today, I woke up early .

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I madefilmed and edited two cooking videos.

For videos, usually, you specifically say you "filmed and edited" them or something like that. Of course, you can say you "made" them, and that works as well, but it's just more general.

I didn't do another things because I felt tired so I stoped to do itvery much else because I was too tired.

Not 100% sure what you were trying to say here, but "another" is singular and "things" is plural, so they don't agree, and "stopped to do it" doesn't really make sense here either.

I took a shower, and then I took a rest because my body needed it.

In the afternoon, I revisewed some Spanish lessons.

In American English, "revised" sounds more formal than "reviewed" learning material.

I hope it gets a lot of views.

You need a noun after "hope" to act as a subject for "gets." Here, I assumed you were talking about the video you post to TikTok, but you can also alternatively say: "I hope I get a lot of views."

I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.

I took a shower then I took a restrested for a while because my body needed it.

I hope it gets a lot of views.