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Writing Challenge, Day 263

Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge. Today, I woke up early . I made two cooking videos. I didn't do another things because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.
I took a shower then I took a rest because my body need it.

In the afternoon, I revised some Spanish lessons. In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok. I hope get a lot of views.

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Writing Challenge, Day 263

Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today, I woke up early .

I made two cooking videos.

In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok.

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Aug. 23, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 263

Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge.

In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok.

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courageuse19

Aug. 23, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 263

Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today, I woke up early .

I made two cooking videos.

In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok.

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courageuse19

Aug. 23, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 263


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Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Today, I woke up early .


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Today, I woke up early . Today, I woke up early.

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I made two cooking videos.


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I madefilmed and edited two cooking videos. I filmed and edited two cooking videos.

For videos, usually, you specifically say you "filmed and edited" them or something like that. Of course, you can say you "made" them, and that works as well, but it's just more general.

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I didn't do another things because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.


I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it. I didn't do anything else because I felt tired.

I didn't do another things because I felt tired so I stoped to do itvery much else because I was too tired. I didn't do very much else because I was too tired.

Not 100% sure what you were trying to say here, but "another" is singular and "things" is plural, so they don't agree, and "stopped to do it" doesn't really make sense here either.

I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it. I didn't do anything else because I felt tired.

I didn't do another thingsything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it. I didn't do anything else because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.

I took a shower then I took a rest because my body need it.


I took a shower then I took a restrested for a while because my body needed it. I took a shower then rested for a while because my body needed it.

I took a shower, and then I took a rest because my body needed it. I took a shower, and then I took a rest because my body needed it.

I took a shower and then I took a rest because my body needed it. I took a shower and then I took a rest because my body needed it.

I took a shower then I took a rest because my body needed it. I took a shower then I took a rest because my body needed it.

In the afternoon, I revised some Spanish lessons.


In the afternoon, I revisewed some Spanish lessons. In the afternoon, I reviewed some Spanish lessons.

In American English, "revised" sounds more formal than "reviewed" learning material.

In the afternoon, I revisewed some Spanish lessons. In the afternoon, I reviewed some Spanish lessons.

I think this might be a difference of dialect.

In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok.


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I hope get a lot of views.


I hope it gets a lot of views. I hope it gets a lot of views.

I hope it gets a lot of views. I hope it gets a lot of views.

You need a noun after "hope" to act as a subject for "gets." Here, I assumed you were talking about the video you post to TikTok, but you can also alternatively say: "I hope I get a lot of views."

I hope it gets a lot of views. I hope it gets a lot of views.

I hope I get a lot of views. I hope I get a lot of views.

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