Aug. 20, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 261
Today is day 261 of my daily English writing challenge. Today, I woke up early to film video of my recipes. My dishes were so delicious. I am so excited to post them on TikTok.
In the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konw his news and how is feeling. He was so delighted to hear my voice and me too. we didn't speak for a while.
Writing Challenge, Day 261
Today is day 261 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today, I woke up early to film videos of my recipes.
My dishes were so delicious.
I am so excited to post them on TikTok.
In the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konwhear his news and how he is feeling.
He was so delighted to hear my voice and me tooI was happy to hear his.
we dihadn't speakoken for a while before today.
Today is dDay 2/61 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today, I woke up early to film video of my recipes. (see note)
Today, I woke up early to make videos of my cooking. Or: " make videos of dishes I have prepared."
My dishes were so delicious. (see note)
The food was so good. Or "The food was delicious". With good, we can add the modifier "so". But delicious is a strong enough word that it is weird to use an adjective to intensify it.
In the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konow his news and how he is feeling.
This can be phrased more colloquially in many ways.
In the afternoon, I called a friend to:
1. hear what he has been up to
2. catch up (with him)
3. connect
If you are saying to find out "how HE is feeling", it implies that he is sick or depressed and you are checking in on their physical or emotional state.
He was so delighted to hear my voice and me too.
"Delighted" is a lovely and formal word so we wouldn't use "so" in front of it. Delighted "high brow" but So is common day lingo. So is like using the word "cool" but delighted is a word Moliere would use. They don't match. :)
wWe didhaven't speakoken for a while.
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Awesome! Everyone would 100% understand everything you said. It was great. These changes just make it a bit more colloquial.
By the way, the words Recipes, Dishes and Food represent 3 very different things in English.
When you say to "film recipes" is means to make videos of the sheet of paper that has the ingredients on it. So recipe is the sheet of instructions for making the DISH.
Dishes/Food are what you serve.
And food is what you eat.
I hope this helps!
Aug. 21, 2023
Thank you. you are very kind to me.
Aug. 21, 2023
De rien!
Today, I woke up early to film a video of my recipes.
ILater in the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konw his newsget an update on what he's been up to and how ihe's feeling.
He was so delighted to hear my voice and me too.
wWe didhaven't speakoken for a while.
Today, I woke up early to film a video of my recipes.
My dishes were so delicious.
Meals might be a better word than dishes.
In the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konow his news and how is feeling.
He was so delighted to hear my voice and me tooso was I.
“Me too” is only used as a sentence on its own as a response.
wWe dihadn'’t speakoken for a while.
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Great work! Keep it up!
Aug. 21, 2023
Thank you.
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Today, I woke up early to film video of my recipes. Today, I woke up early to film a video of my recipes. Today, I woke up early to film a video of my recipes. Today, I woke up early to film video of my recipes. (see note) Today, I woke up early to make videos of my cooking. Or: " make videos of dishes I have prepared." Today, I woke up early to film videos of my recipes. |
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My dishes were so delicious. My dishes were so delicious. Meals might be a better word than dishes. My dishes were The food was so good. Or "The food was delicious". With good, we can add the modifier "so". But delicious is a strong enough word that it is weird to use an adjective to intensify it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the afternoon, I have called to a friend to konw his news and how is feeling. In the afternoon, I
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He was so delighted to hear my voice and me too. He was so delighted to hear my voice and “Me too” is only used as a sentence on its own as a response. He was so delighted to hear my voice He was "Delighted" is a lovely and formal word so we wouldn't use "so" in front of it. Delighted "high brow" but So is common day lingo. So is like using the word "cool" but delighted is a word Moliere would use. They don't match. :) He was so delighted to hear my voice and |
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