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courageuse19

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Writing Challenge, Day 255

Today is day 255 of my daily English writing challenge. Today, I filmed tow videos of a recipes. They were delicious especially I put on a good decoration.

In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I was not avalaible on Skype today because I was tired.

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Writing Challenge, Day 255

Today is day 255 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today, I filmed twow videos of a recipe videos.

They were food was delicious, especially I put on a good decorationafter I plated them nicely.

I changed this a bit to flow better and express your meaning a bit more naturally.

In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I wasould not be availaible on Skype today because I was tired.

In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I was not availaible on Skype today because I was tired.

Writing Challenge, Day 255

Today is day 255 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today, I filmed towo videos of a recipes.

I changed "tow" to "two." This is just a small spelling error.

Since you only have one recipe (indicated by "a"), you need to remove the "s" at the end.

They were delicious especially because I put on a good decoration.

If this isn't what you were trying to say, let me know.

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Just a few small errors. Good work!

Writing Challenge, Day 255


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Today is day 255 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Today, I filmed tow videos of a recipes.


Today, I filmed towo videos of a recipes.

I changed "tow" to "two." This is just a small spelling error. Since you only have one recipe (indicated by "a"), you need to remove the "s" at the end.

Today, I filmed twow videos of a recipe videos.

They were delicious especially I put on a good decoration.


They were delicious especially because I put on a good decoration.

If this isn't what you were trying to say, let me know.

They were food was delicious, especially I put on a good decorationafter I plated them nicely.

I changed this a bit to flow better and express your meaning a bit more naturally.

In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I was not avalaible on Skype today because I was tired.


In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I was not availaible on Skype today because I was tired.

In the afternoon, I sent a message to tell a friend I wasould not be availaible on Skype today because I was tired.

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