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courageuse19

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Writing Challenge, Day 249

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme new video of a recipe to post on TikTok. but I didn't finish it. Because I felt very tired. I hope to do it tomorrow.

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Writing Challenge, Day 249

Today is day 249/249th day of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was goplanning to filme a new video of a recipe toand post it on TikTok.

but I didn't finish it.

BIt's because I felt very tired.

I hope to do it tomorrow.

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courageuse19

Aug. 10, 2023

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Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 249

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok. today,

include the second sentence here with the next one

but I didn't finish it.

this is an incomplete sentence

Bbecause I felt very tired.

I hope to do it tomorrow.

Writing Challenge, Day 249

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok.,

Don't need second today. "a new video" as there is one of them and you are introducing it for the first time. Put a comma instead of a full stop and carry on into next line.

but I didn't finish it.

Carry on to next line.

Bbecause I felt very tired.

Remove capital as continuation of earlier sentence.

I hope to do it tomorrow.

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Good. Mostly punctuation errors but perfectly understandable.

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courageuse19

Aug. 10, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok. today,

but I didn't finish it.

Bbecause I felt very tired.

Writing Challenge, Day 249


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Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme new video of a recipe to post on TikTok.


Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok. today,

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok.,

Don't need second today. "a new video" as there is one of them and you are introducing it for the first time. Put a comma instead of a full stop and carry on into next line.

Today is day 249 of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was going to filme a new video of a recipe to post on TikTok. today,

include the second sentence here with the next one

Today is day 249/249th day of my daily English writing challenge.Today I was goplanning to filme a new video of a recipe toand post it on TikTok.

but I didn't finish it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

but I didn't finish it.

but I didn't finish it.

Carry on to next line.

but I didn't finish it.

this is an incomplete sentence

Because I felt very tired.


Bbecause I felt very tired.

Bbecause I felt very tired.

Remove capital as continuation of earlier sentence.

Bbecause I felt very tired.

BIt's because I felt very tired.

I hope to do it tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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