Aug. 8, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 248
Today is day 248 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed new recipe video to post on TikTok. Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put more honey on the sauce..
Writing Challenge, Day 248
Today is day 248 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed a new recipe video to post on TikTok.
consider removing the repetition with the previous sentence (repeating the word today) by removing that word in the second sentence
Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put morea lot of honey oin the sauce. / I put too much honey in the sauce.
Today I filmed a/an new recipe video to post on TikTok.
Add the preposition a/an before new as "filmed new recipe" doesn't flow
Writing Challenge, Day 248
Today is day 248 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed new video of a recipe video to post on TikTok.
Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put moretoo much honey oin the sauce..
Aug. 9, 2023
Today I filmed new video of a recipe video to post on TikTok.
I think "I filmed a new recipe video" is perfectly acceptable (and maybe preferable), but your correction is also correct.
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Writing Challenge, Day 248 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is day 248 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I filmed new recipe video to post on TikTok. Today I filmed new video of a recipe Today I filmed a/an new recipe video to post on TikTok. Add the preposition a/an before new as "filmed new recipe" doesn't flow
consider removing the repetition with the previous sentence (repeating the word today) by removing that word in the second sentence |
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Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put more honey on the sauce.. Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put Unfortunately, my sister didn't like it because I put |
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