Aug. 7, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 247
Today is day 247 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed new recipe and then to post on TikTok. My plate it was so delicious. Tomorrow also I will film another new recipe.
Today is day 247 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed new recipe and thenvideo to post on TikTok.
we usually specify the fact that it was a video, and you don’t need to say ‘then’, but you could say ‘which I then posted on tiktok’ or ‘to post on tiktok’
My plate itdish was so delicious.
‘Plate’ refers to the actual crockery, not the food in English so we tend to say dish.
Tomorrow also I will film another new recipe.
You don’t need to say ‘also’ and ‘another’, so you could say ‘tomorrow I will film another new recipe’, or ‘tomorrow I will also film a new recipe’.
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Well done on your streak!!
Aug. 8, 2023
Thank you so much.
Today I filmed a new recipe and then to posted it on TikTok.
My plate itdish was so delicious.
Writing Challenge, Day 247
Today is day 247 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed a new recipe and then to posted it on TikTok.
Since you did not say what the specific recipe was, you should use the article "a". If you were to have stated what the specific recipe was, then you could have said "the".
Writing Challenge, Day 247
Today is day 247 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed new recipe and then to posted it on TikTok.
"posted" needs to be past tense as well. You need to put in the pronoun to refer back to "the new recipe".
My platedish it was so delicious.
"dish" is used to refer to food rather than "plate".
Tomorrow also I will also film another new recipe.
"also" sound wrong immediately after "tomorrow".
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That is a long streak.
Aug. 8, 2023
No need to use it in the sentence.
My plate it was so delicious. The dish was so delicious.
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Today I filmed new recipe and then to post on TikTok. Today I filmed new recipe and then "posted" needs to be past tense as well. You need to put in the pronoun to refer back to "the new recipe". Today I filmed a new recipe and then Since you did not say what the specific recipe was, you should use the article "a". If you were to have stated what the specific recipe was, then you could have said "the". Today I filmed a new recipe and then Today I filmed new recipe we usually specify the fact that it was a video, and you don’t need to say ‘then’, but you could say ‘which I then posted on tiktok’ or ‘to post on tiktok’ |
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My plate it was so delicious. My "dish" is used to refer to food rather than "plate". My My ‘Plate’ refers to the actual crockery, not the food in English so we tend to say dish. |
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Tomorrow also I will film another new recipe. Tomorrow "also" sound wrong immediately after "tomorrow". Tomorrow You don’t need to say ‘also’ and ‘another’, so you could say ‘tomorrow I will film another new recipe’, or ‘tomorrow I will also film a new recipe’. |
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