June 2, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 243
Today is day 243 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I felt a little good thay after yesterday. I helped my my friend that she needed me.
Today I felt a little good thay afterbetter than yesterday.
when you say "than" to contrast something you it usually follows this formula :
"x is better than Y" in this case today is 'x' and yesterday is 'y' thusly "I felt better today(x) than yesterday(y)"
Today, I felt a little good thaybetter after yesterday.
I helped my my friend thatbecause she needed me.
Today I felt a little good thay afterbetter than yesterday.
Technically, well and better are used to describe your state of wellness, not good. "After yesterday" is redundant as today implicitly imples that.
I helped my my friend that shewho needed me.
Who is typically used for subordinate clauses when relating to a person. That is used more for objects e.g. "I have a phone that doesn't work."
Writing Challenge, Day 243
Today is day 243 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I felt a little good thay afterquite good about yesterday.
I helped myout my friend that shewho needed me.
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Writing Challenge, Day 243
Today is day 243 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I felt a little good thay afterbetter than yesterday.
good -> better -> best
I helped my my friend thatwhen she needed me.
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Today is day 243 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I felt a little good thay after yesterday. Today I felt a little good -> better -> best Today I felt Today I felt Technically, well and better are used to describe your state of wellness, not good. "After yesterday" is redundant as today implicitly imples that. Today, I felt a little Today I felt a little when you say "than" to contrast something you it usually follows this formula : "x is better than Y" in this case today is 'x' and yesterday is 'y' thusly "I felt better today(x) than yesterday(y)" |
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I helped my my friend that she needed me. I helped my I helped I helped my Who is typically used for subordinate clauses when relating to a person. That is used more for objects e.g. "I have a phone that doesn't work." I helped my my friend |
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