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May 22, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 233

Today is day 233 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I reviewed some lessons in English. I discovered if I stoped to revise for a long days. I forgot some words that's why I need to revise, read and practice everyday.

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Writing Challenge, Day 233

Today is day 233 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I reviewed some lessons in English.

I discovered that if I stopped to reviseing for a long dayamount of time, I would forget some words.

This sounds more natural.

I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read and practice every day.

Me, too!

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Very nice work!

Writing Challenge, Day 233

Today is day 233 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I reviewed some lessons in EnglishEnglish lessons.

I discovered that if I stopped to reviseing for a long daysperiod of time, I forget words that I have learned.

The sentence is not complete so it needs a comma

I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read and practice everyday.

Writing Challenge, Day 233

Today is day 233 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today, I reviewed some lessons in EnglishEnglish lessons.

I discovered that if I stopped to revise for a long daytime, I forgot some words.

I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read, and practice every day.

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Great job on maintaining your daily English writing challenge for 233 days!

Writing Challenge, Day 233


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Today is day 233 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Today I reviewed some lessons in English.


Today, I reviewed some lessons in EnglishEnglish lessons.

Today I reviewed some lessons in EnglishEnglish lessons.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I discovered if I stoped to revise for a long days.


I discovered that if I stopped to revise for a long daytime, I forgot some words.

I discovered that if I stopped to reviseing for a long daysperiod of time, I forget words that I have learned.

The sentence is not complete so it needs a comma

I discovered that if I stopped to reviseing for a long dayamount of time, I would forget some words.

This sounds more natural.

I forgot some words that's why I need to revise, read and practice everyday.


I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read, and practice every day.

I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read and practice everyday.

I forgot some words tThat's why I need to revise, read and practice every day.

Me, too!

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