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courageuse19

May 20, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 231

Today is day 231 of my daily English writing challenge. Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thought because of medecin that's reason she always feels exhausted.

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Writing Challenge, Day 231

Today is day 231 of my daily English writing challenge.

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thoughtthinks she always feels exhausted because of the medeicin that's reason she always feels exhaustede she's taking.

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I hope she feels better soon! Again, nice work.

Writing Challenge, Day 231

Today is day 231 of my daily English writing challenge.

Tomorrow, my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick, and she thoughinks that because of the medeicine, that's the reason she always feels exhausted.

I changed “thought” to “thinks” because it would be more accurate to use the present tense.

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Keep up the great work with your writing challenge!

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thought because ofthe medeicin that's reasone was why she always feelslt exhausted.

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Nice writing! Just a few small grammar and spelling mistakes.

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courageuse19

May 21, 2023

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Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 231

Today is day 231 of my daily English writing challenge.

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's sovery sick and she thoughtbelieves she's feeling exhausted because of the medeicin that's reason she always feels exhaustede she's taking.

The beginning of the sentence is fine, but the end starts to sound a little unnatural.

Writing Challenge, Day 231


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Today is day 231 of my daily English writing challenge.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thought because of medecin that's reason she always feels exhausted.


Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's sovery sick and she thoughtbelieves she's feeling exhausted because of the medeicin that's reason she always feels exhaustede she's taking.

The beginning of the sentence is fine, but the end starts to sound a little unnatural.

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thought because ofthe medeicin that's reasone was why she always feelslt exhausted.

Tomorrow, my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick, and she thoughinks that because of the medeicine, that's the reason she always feels exhausted.

I changed “thought” to “thinks” because it would be more accurate to use the present tense.

Tomorrow my mother will be traveling to Algiers because she's so sick and she thoughtthinks she always feels exhausted because of the medeicin that's reason she always feels exhaustede she's taking.

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