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courageuse19

May 11, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 222

Today is day 222 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I edited one of my video. I hope it will acceptance from viewers.

Corrections

Today I edited one of my videos.

I hope itmy viewers will acceptance from viewers/enjoy it.

I'd say enjoy here :)

Writing Challenge, Day 222

Today is day 222 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I edited one of my videos.

"One of my [plural noun]" is a set phrase.

I hope it will acceptance from viewersmy viewers like it.

This is more natural in the US.

Feedback

Good work! And they did! ^^

Today I edited one of my videos.

I hope it will acceptance from viewersmy viewers will like it.

Writing Challenge, Day 222

Today is day 222 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I edited one of my videos.

I hope it will gain acceptance from my viewers.

Alternatively, you could say 'I hope it will be received well by my viewers'

Writing Challenge, Day 222


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 222 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I edited one of my video.


Today I edited one of my videos.

Today I edited one of my videos.

Today I edited one of my videos.

"One of my [plural noun]" is a set phrase.

Today I edited one of my videos.

I hope it will acceptance from viewers.


I hope it will acceptance from viewersmy viewers will like it.

I hope it will gain acceptance from my viewers.

Alternatively, you could say 'I hope it will be received well by my viewers'

I hope it will acceptance from viewersmy viewers like it.

This is more natural in the US.

I hope itmy viewers will acceptance from viewers/enjoy it.

I'd say enjoy here :)

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