May 8, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 219
Today is day 219 of my daily English writing challenge. I filmed three recipes. It were so delicious. My sister liked them.
Tomorrow I'll film more recipes again. I am so excited!
Writing Challenge, Day 2189
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Today is day 219 of my daily English writing challenge.
I filmed three recipes.
ItThey were so delicious.
We need a plural pronoun for "three recipes."
My sister liked them.
or,
My sister liked them all.
My sister liked all of them.
Tomorrow I'll film more recipes again.
I am so excited!
Feedback
Good for you and good work!
ItThey were so delicious.!
Recipes is plural --> “they”
“So delicious” indicates a level of excitement/passion. End with an exclamation point to show that, otherwise it feels inconsistent
Tomorrow I'll film more recipes againtomorrow.
While not technically incorrect, “tomorrow” and “again” in the same sentence feels just a bit redundant. It works sometimes but it doesn't work that well here, likely because “again” isn't really important to the message of this sentence.
Feedback
If you want, you could post your recipes in English for practice! They sound delicious and I’d love to try them :)
Writing Challenge, Day 218
Today is day 219 of my daily English writing challenge.
I filmed three recipes.
ItThey were so delicious.
My sister liked them.
Tomorrow I'll film more recipes again.
I am so excited!
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Writing Challenge, Day 219 |
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Writing Challenge, Day 218 This sentence has been marked as perfect! Writing Challenge, Day 21 ;) |
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Today is day 219 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I filmed three recipes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It were so delicious.
"They" makes sense for plural usage.
Recipes is plural --> “they” “So delicious” indicates a level of excitement/passion. End with an exclamation point to show that, otherwise it feels inconsistent
We need a plural pronoun for "three recipes." |
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My sister liked them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My sister liked them. or, My sister liked them all. My sister liked all of them. |
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Tomorrow I'll film more recipes again. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
While not technically incorrect, “tomorrow” and “again” in the same sentence feels just a bit redundant. It works sometimes but it doesn't work that well here, likely because “again” isn't really important to the message of this sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am so excited! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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