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courageuse19

May 5, 2023

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Writing Challenge , Day 216

Today is day 216 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I prepared the name of my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday. I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.

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Writing Challenge , Day 216

Today is day 216 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I preparedcame up with the name ofs for my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.

We don't usually "prepare" names. We come up with them, create them and make them.

You haven't filmed the recipes yet so that's why it's not past tense.

I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.

" to post on TikTok" describes what you're doing with the recipes so we don't need an "and" here.

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courageuse19

May 6, 2023

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Today I preparedcame up with the name ofs for my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.

Yes, you're right Mari.

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Writing Challenge , Day 216

Today is day 216 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I prepared the names of my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.

Instead of saying "prepared", you might want to use "wrote down" or "chose".

I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.

Writing Challenge , Day 216


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Today is day 216 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Today I prepared the name of my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.


Today I prepared the names of my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.

Instead of saying "prepared", you might want to use "wrote down" or "chose".

Today I preparedcame up with the name ofs for my recipes that I'll filmed on Sunday.

We don't usually "prepare" names. We come up with them, create them and make them. You haven't filmed the recipes yet so that's why it's not past tense.

I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.


I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.

I need to make more recipes and to post on TikTok.

" to post on TikTok" describes what you're doing with the recipes so we don't need an "and" here.

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