May 4, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 215
Today is day 215 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed tow recipes to post on TikTok. It was so delicious. My sister liked it!.
On Sunday I'll to film another recipes. So Tomorrow I need to take a rest.
Writing Challenge, Day 215
Today is day 215 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed tow recipes to post on TikTok.
Two *
On Sunday I'll to film another recipes.
I’ll film another recipe
/ more recipes
Feedback
Few grammatical errors, good work
May 5, 2023
Thank you.
Writing Challenge, Day 215
Today is day 215 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed towo recipes to post on TikTok.
It wasThey were so delicious.
Since you're referencing more than one recipe, it's better to use a plural pronoun in this sentence.
My sister liked it!.them!
We don't use a period after an exclamation point. The exclamation point becomes the terminal marker.
or,
My sister liked both of them!
I'm getting hungry just reading this ...
On Sunday I'll to film anothermore recipes.
"will" is an auxiliary verb in this sentence so the infinitive form of a verb should immediately follow it instead of a preposition like "to."
So Ttomorrow I need to take a rest.
or,
That's why I want to take a rest tomorrow.
That's why I want to take a break tomorrow.
Feedback
Well done! Enjoy your rest!
May 5, 2023
Thank you.
Writing Challenge, Day 215
Today is day 215 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed towo recipes to post on TikTok.
It wasThey were so delicious.
My sister liked it!.them!
On Sunday I'll to film another recipes.
So Tomorrow I need to take a rest.
It seems like you want to connect this thought to the previous sentence. To do that, you might want to use a conjunction. I suggest "On Sunday, I'll film another recipe, because I need to take a rest tomorrow."
Writing Challenge, Day 215
Today is day 215 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today, I filmed towo recipes to post on TikTok.
It wasThey were so delicious.
Since you wrote about two recipes, the subject of this sentence has to be plural.
My sister liked it!.them!
You can only use either an exclamation point or a period ("full stop" in British English) to end a sentence - you can't use them together.
On Sunday I'll to film another recipes.
So Ttomorrow I need to take a brestak.
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Today I filmed tow recipes to post on TikTok. Today, I filmed t Today I filmed t Today I filmed t Today I filmed tow recipes to post on TikTok. Two * |
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It was so delicious.
Since you wrote about two recipes, the subject of this sentence has to be plural.
Since you're referencing more than one recipe, it's better to use a plural pronoun in this sentence. |
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My sister liked it!. My sister liked You can only use either an exclamation point or a period ("full stop" in British English) to end a sentence - you can't use them together. My sister liked My sister liked We don't use a period after an exclamation point. The exclamation point becomes the terminal marker. or, My sister liked both of them! I'm getting hungry just reading this ... |
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On Sunday I'll to film another recipes. On Sunday I'll On Sunday I'll On Sunday I'll "will" is an auxiliary verb in this sentence so the infinitive form of a verb should immediately follow it instead of a preposition like "to." On Sunday I'll to film another recipes. I’ll film another recipe / more recipes |
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So Tomorrow I need to take a rest. So
It seems like you want to connect this thought to the previous sentence. To do that, you might want to use a conjunction. I suggest "On Sunday, I'll film another recipe, because I need to take a rest tomorrow." So or, That's why I want to take a rest tomorrow. That's why I want to take a break tomorrow. |
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