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Writing Challenge, Day 214

Today is day 214 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.
In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his new and how's life with him. He was so supprised about my call. Porbaly if he was not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.

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Writing Challenge, Day 214

Today is day 214 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his newabout what he's been doing and how's his life with himhas been going.

He was so suprprised about my call.

or,

He was so surprised by my call.

Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we canprobably could talk over Skype.

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Writing Challenge, Day 214

Today is day 214 of my daily English writing challenge.

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Today is day 214 of my daily English writing challenge.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his news and how's life is with him.

If you're calling on the phone, you don't need to include "to" before the subject. If you say "I called to my friend", that has the connotation of yelling aloud in person.

He was so suprprised aboutby my call.

"About" can also be used here, but "by" sounds more natural.

Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we can probably talk over Skype.

"Probably" works best directly before the verb it's being applied to. It's not technically wrong to put it at the beginning of the sentence ("Probably, if he is not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.") but it sounds less natural.

Writing Challenge, Day 214

Today is day 214 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his news and ask how's life with him.

He was so suprprised about my call.

PorbalyMaybe if he wasere not busy tomorrow, we canould talk over Skype.

Subjunctive.

Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

"to" would be the correct preposition here.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his new and how's life with himow he is doing.

I'm assuming you're asking about how your friend is doing.

He was so suprprised about mythat I called.

Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.

Writing Challenge, Day 214


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Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.


Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

"to" would be the correct preposition here.

Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

Today I filmed two recipes for to post on TikTok.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his new and how's life with him.


In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his new and how's life with himow he is doing.

I'm assuming you're asking about how your friend is doing.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his news and ask how's life with him.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his news and how's life is with him.

If you're calling on the phone, you don't need to include "to" before the subject. If you say "I called to my friend", that has the connotation of yelling aloud in person.

In the afternoon, I called to my friend to hear his newabout what he's been doing and how's his life with himhas been going.

He was so supprised about my call.


He was so suprprised about mythat I called.

He was so suprprised about my call.

He was so suprprised aboutby my call.

"About" can also be used here, but "by" sounds more natural.

He was so suprprised about my call.

or, He was so surprised by my call.

Porbaly if he was not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.


Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.

PorbalyMaybe if he wasere not busy tomorrow, we canould talk over Skype.

Subjunctive.

Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we can probably talk over Skype.

"Probably" works best directly before the verb it's being applied to. It's not technically wrong to put it at the beginning of the sentence ("Probably, if he is not busy tomorrow, we can talk over Skype.") but it sounds less natural.

Porbaly iIf he wais not busy tomorrow, we canprobably could talk over Skype.

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