April 30, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 211
Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency. But she asked to come back there in next week.😥
Writing Challenge, Day 211
Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency.
But she asked me to come back there in next week.😥
aww.
Feedback
I hope it works out! Good work!
But she asked to come back there in next week.😥 - grammatically correct version¶
But she asked me to come back next week.😥- less awkward and grammatically correct version
This sentence is quite unclear. Who is she asking to come back next week? Also who is "she"? Is it an employee at Telecom? Also the word "in" was out of place and not needed.
Feedback
The first two sentences were fine. The last one could have been improved.
Today I went to the Telecom Commercial Agency.
But sthey asked me to come back there in next week.😥
I used 'they' because it makes more sense. It's more like the woman is asking you on part of the company and you didn't say "the woman asked, the receptionist asked, etc."
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Writing Challenge, Day 211 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency. Today I went to the Telecom Commercial Agency. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But she asked to come back there in next week.😥 But I used 'they' because it makes more sense. It's more like the woman is asking you on part of the company and you didn't say "the woman asked, the receptionist asked, etc." But she asked to come back there This sentence is quite unclear. Who is she asking to come back next week? Also who is "she"? Is it an employee at Telecom? Also the word "in" was out of place and not needed. But she asked me to come back aww. But |
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