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April 20, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 201

Today is day 201 of my daily English writing challenge. Yesterday I listened to a video in English. She spoked about how to creat another version and to achieve your goals in our life. They are many words that I didn't understand and I need to look in up in the dictionary. In my opinion, it's good method to improve when we want to learn a new language.

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Writing Challenge, Day 201

Today is day 201 of my daily English writing challenge.

Yesterday I listened towatched a video in English.

Remember, we "watch" videos and "listen" to music or media which don't have images.

She spoked about how to create another version andof yourself and how to achieve your goals in our life.

"spoke" is already past tense. Remember, speak, spoke, has spoken (present, past, past perfect)

or, more natural in the US:

She talked about how to create another version of yourself and how to achieve your goals in life.

They are were many words that I didn't understand andso I need to look inthem up in the dictionary.

You watched it in the past so this should be past tense.

In my opinion, it's a good method tofor improveing when we want to learn a new language.

Feedback

I agree but my favorite is memorizing song lyrics. Anything which we enjoy should be effective. Good work!

Writing Challenge, Day 201

Today is day 201 of my daily English writing challenge.

Yesterday I listened to a video in English.

She spoked about how to create another version of yourself (?) and to achieve your goals in our life.

It would be better to start the setence with "The woman in the video spoke about..." as it is unknow to another reader who "she" is
What do you mean by another version?

They are many words that I didn't understand and I needed to look (them) in up in the dictionary.

In my opinion, it's good method to improve when we want to learn a new language.

Feedback

Great writing! :)

Writing Challenge, Day 201


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Today is day 201 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Yesterday I listened to a video in English.


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Yesterday I listened towatched a video in English.

Remember, we "watch" videos and "listen" to music or media which don't have images.

She spoked about how to creat another version and to achieve your goals in our life.


She spoked about how to create another version of yourself (?) and to achieve your goals in our life.

It would be better to start the setence with "The woman in the video spoke about..." as it is unknow to another reader who "she" is What do you mean by another version?

She spoked about how to create another version andof yourself and how to achieve your goals in our life.

"spoke" is already past tense. Remember, speak, spoke, has spoken (present, past, past perfect) or, more natural in the US: She talked about how to create another version of yourself and how to achieve your goals in life.

They are many words that I didn't understand and I need to look in up in the dictionary.


They are many words that I didn't understand and I needed to look (them) in up in the dictionary.

They are were many words that I didn't understand andso I need to look inthem up in the dictionary.

You watched it in the past so this should be past tense.

In my opinion, it's good method to improve when we want to learn a new language.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my opinion, it's a good method tofor improveing when we want to learn a new language.

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