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courageuse19

April 19, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 200

Today is day 200 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorte it because I didn't find a chocolat so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

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Writing Challenge, Day 200

Today is day 200 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I filmed a recipe it wasfor a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find any chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

I'll == I will so "I'll will..." means "I will will ..."

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That sounds yummy! Good work!

Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find a chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

Today I filmed a recipe” is a sentence so it needs something to separate itself from “it was a cake”

A couple spelling errors

I’ll = I will — so I’ll will is incorrect because it means I will will

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Overall very good!

Writing Challenge, Day 200

Today is day 200 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I didn't find any chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

You used both 'I'll' and 'will', which means the same.

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I really like the fact that you write something everyday!! You'll improve very rapidly this way.

Today I filmed a recipe ivideo. It was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find a chocolate (icing/frosting?) so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

I assume you mean a frosting (or icing in British/Australian English) but let me know if not :)

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Great work! A 200 day streak is incredible :)

Writing Challenge, Day 200


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Today is day 200 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorte it because I didn't find a chocolat so I'll will buy it tomorrow.


Today I filmed a recipe ivideo. It was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find a chocolate (icing/frosting?) so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

I assume you mean a frosting (or icing in British/Australian English) but let me know if not :)

Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I didn't find any chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

You used both 'I'll' and 'will', which means the same.

Today I filmed a recipe it was a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find a chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

Today I filmed a recipe” is a sentence so it needs something to separate itself from “it was a cake” A couple spelling errors I’ll = I will — so I’ll will is incorrect because it means I will will

Today I filmed a recipe it wasfor a cake, but I didn't decorate it because I dicouldn't find any chocolate so I'll will buy it tomorrow.

I'll == I will so "I'll will..." means "I will will ..."

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