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courageuse19

April 17, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 198

Today is day 198 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I wanted to write some sentences becuase I want to know if I understand your corrections.

- When I come back home , my mother was steaming couscous. In this sentence I don't need to put preposition " at. "

-I have been problem of the internet since three months.

Or,

I have problem of the internet around three months.

-I send and eamil to a friend that I told her that we can meet over Skype the next week.

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Writing Challenge, Day 198

Today is day 198 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I wanted to write some sentences becuause I want to know if I understand your corrections.

- When I coame back home , my mother was steaming couscous.

This should be past tense but the "came back home" part is perfect.

In this sentence I don't need to putuse the preposition " at.

Correct because you're already home so there's no movement or directional change.

"

- I have beenhad a problem ofwith the internet sincefor three months.

"I have had a problem" → In the US, we always talk about "having problems."

"... for three months" because it's describing a definite period of time.

Or,

I have had a problem ofwith the internet aroundfor about three months.

This is more natural in the US.

- I sendt and eamail to a friend that I toldo tell her that we can meet over Skype the next week.

We don't really use articles before "next [time period]."

Feedback

Good questions and nice work!

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courageuse19

April 18, 2023

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- I sendt and eamail to a friend that I toldo tell her that we can meet over Skype the next week.

It's interresting! Now I understand.

Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 198

Today is day 198 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I wanted to write some sentences becuause I wanted to knowsee if I'd understand your corrections.

- When I comegot back home , my mother was steaming couscous.

or "When I came back home.."

In this sentence I don't need to put preposition " at.

"

-I have been having problem ofs with the internet sincefor three months.

Or,

I have had problem ofs with the internet around three months.

-I sendt and eamail to a friend that I toldelling her that we can meet over Skype (the) next week.

Needs past tense

Feedback

Great writing! :)

Writing Challenge, Day 198


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Today is day 198 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I wanted to write some sentences becuase I want to know if I understand your corrections.


Today I wanted to write some sentences becuause I wanted to knowsee if I'd understand your corrections.

Today I wanted to write some sentences becuause I want to know if I understand your corrections.

- When I come back home , my mother was steaming couscous.


- When I comegot back home , my mother was steaming couscous.

or "When I came back home.."

- When I coame back home , my mother was steaming couscous.

This should be past tense but the "came back home" part is perfect.

In this sentence I don't need to put preposition " at.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this sentence I don't need to putuse the preposition " at.

Correct because you're already home so there's no movement or directional change.

"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-I have been problem of the internet since three months.


-I have been having problem ofs with the internet sincefor three months.

- I have beenhad a problem ofwith the internet sincefor three months.

"I have had a problem" → In the US, we always talk about "having problems." "... for three months" because it's describing a definite period of time.

Or,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have problem of the internet around three months.


I have had problem ofs with the internet around three months.

I have had a problem ofwith the internet aroundfor about three months.

This is more natural in the US.

-I send and eamil to a friend that I told her that we can meet over Skype the next week.


-I sendt and eamail to a friend that I toldelling her that we can meet over Skype (the) next week.

Needs past tense

- I sendt and eamail to a friend that I toldo tell her that we can meet over Skype the next week.

We don't really use articles before "next [time period]."

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