April 16, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 197
Today is day 197 of my daily English writing challenge. I had failed so many times but, I try to be make myself proud.
Writing Challenge, Day 197
Today is day 197 of my daily English writing challenge.
I hadve failed so many times but, I try to be make myself proud.
April 17, 2023
Thank your supporting me.
Writing Challenge, Day 197
Today is day 197 of my daily English writing challenge.
I hadve failed so many times, but, I try to be make myself proud.
"I have failed" sounds nicer to me, personally - "I had failed" or "I'd failed" needs more of a followup to it. That's how I would use it, anyways.
"but" comes after the comma, not before. Lastly, you do not need to say "to be" here, just "to make"
April 17, 2023
Thank so much.
Writing Challenge, Day 197
Today is day 197 of my daily English writing challenge.
I hadve failed so many times but, I try to be make myself proud.
That's the spirit!
Feedback
Studies show that successful people have failed many times before becoming successful. The secret is in the trying. They would learn something new each time and this, in turn, would contribute to their future success. So you're in good company!
Also, good work!
I hadve failed so many times, but, I try to be make myself proud.
April 17, 2023
Thank you so much.
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I had failed so many times but, I try to be make myself proud. I ha I ha That's the spirit! I ha "I have failed" sounds nicer to me, personally - "I had failed" or "I'd failed" needs more of a followup to it. That's how I would use it, anyways. "but" comes after the comma, not before. Lastly, you do not need to say "to be" here, just "to make" I ha |
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