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April 14, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 195

Today is day 195 of my daily English writing challenge. Yesterday , I posted a sentence but I'm sure it was not clear for you. First of all, I would like to say I am so sorry if I bother you because it's always my fault have become my misunderstanding.
This is a part of my journal.
I had a friend called the failure but since 2017 I known to be a woman more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself! Yes, the door of success is open to me. Again praise to be God!

I wanted to say :
-1- My friend is a faillure.
-2- I gave up in him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.( I am sorry this topic hurts me a lot. I want to turn this page.)

Now, my friends I hope to understand what I wanted to say.

I had an enemy his name was the failure but since 2017 I had felt have become a woman more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself! Yes, the door of success is open to me. Again praise be to God!

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Writing Challenge, Day 195

Today is day 195 of my daily English writing challenge.

Yesterday , I posted a sentence but I'm sure it was not clear forto you.

First of all, I would like to say I am so sorry if I bothered you because it's always my fault have become myfor the misunderstandings.

There's no need to apologize. We're all learning here!

This is a part of my journal from yesterday.

I had a friend called the failure but since 2017 I known to be a woman more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!

Yes, the door of success is open to me.

Again praise to be God!

I wanted to say (the following):

-1- My friend is a faillure.

-2- I gave up ion him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.

You're doing so well now!

( I am sorry but this topic hurts me a lot. I want to turn this page. )

Understandably so!

Now, I hope my friends I hope to understand what I wanted to say.

Yes!

I had an enemy his namand he was thea failure but, since 2017, I had feltfeel I have become a woman who's more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!

Yay!

Yes, the door of success is open to me.

Again, praise be to God!

Feedback

Congratulations and good for you! You can thank all of the hard work you did! Good work!

Writing Challenge, Day 195

Today is day 195 of my daily English writing challenge.

Yesterday , I posted a sentence, but I'm sure it was not clear forto you.

Place a comma before a conjunction like, but.
You can keep the "I'm sure", and there's nothing wrong with it, just removed it to be concise.

First of all, I would like to say that I am so sorry if I bothered you because it's always my fault thavet it becoame mya misunderstanding.

You don't need to add "that", but I think it makes the sentence flow smoother.
Don't blame yourself, we are all still learning how to type in our native language, and occasionally there will be misunderstandings. It's just how the process goes.

This is athe part of my journal.

Because you explained in your previous sentence of the misunderstood sentence, you use the article "the". Plus, you immediately follow up with the originally misunderstood sentence.

I had a friend called the me a failure, but ever since 2017, I known to be a woman morehat I'm a confident so todaywoman, and I can say that I am proud of myself!

You know you can leave a comment on your previous journals, and most likely the corrector will return to read your reply and try to help you.

Yes, tThe door tof success is open to me.

"Yes" seems a little out of place for me.
Also, the sentence itself is a little weird. It's understandable, just odd.

Again pPraise to bebe to God!

I know why you placed "again", but since we didn't see the other praise to be God message here, we can remove "again".

I wanted to say :

-1- My friend is a faillure.

-2- I gave up ion him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.

( I am sorry this topic hurts me a lot. I want to turn this page. )

Now, myI hope friends I hope to understandsee what I wanted to say.

"See" works better in this context.

I had an enemy; his name was the failure, but since 2017 I had felt that I have become a woman more confident woman, so today I can say I am proud of myself!

When you say "His name was the failure" it makes it seem like his name is "the failure".

Yes, tThe door of success is open to me.

"Yes" seems out of place to me.

Again, praise be to God!

Feedback

Great improvements! Keep it up!

Writing Challenge, Day 195


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 195 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday , I posted a sentence but I'm sure it was not clear for you.


Yesterday , I posted a sentence, but I'm sure it was not clear forto you.

Place a comma before a conjunction like, but. You can keep the "I'm sure", and there's nothing wrong with it, just removed it to be concise.

Yesterday , I posted a sentence but I'm sure it was not clear forto you.

First of all, I would like to say I am so sorry if I bother you because it's always my fault have become my misunderstanding.


First of all, I would like to say that I am so sorry if I bothered you because it's always my fault thavet it becoame mya misunderstanding.

You don't need to add "that", but I think it makes the sentence flow smoother. Don't blame yourself, we are all still learning how to type in our native language, and occasionally there will be misunderstandings. It's just how the process goes.

First of all, I would like to say I am so sorry if I bothered you because it's always my fault have become myfor the misunderstandings.

There's no need to apologize. We're all learning here!

This is a part of my journal.


This is athe part of my journal.

Because you explained in your previous sentence of the misunderstood sentence, you use the article "the". Plus, you immediately follow up with the originally misunderstood sentence.

This is a part of my journal from yesterday.

I had a friend called the failure but since 2017 I known to be a woman more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!


I had a friend called the me a failure, but ever since 2017, I known to be a woman morehat I'm a confident so todaywoman, and I can say that I am proud of myself!

You know you can leave a comment on your previous journals, and most likely the corrector will return to read your reply and try to help you.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, the door of success is open to me.


Yes, tThe door tof success is open to me.

"Yes" seems a little out of place for me. Also, the sentence itself is a little weird. It's understandable, just odd.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Again praise to be God!


Again pPraise to bebe to God!

I know why you placed "again", but since we didn't see the other praise to be God message here, we can remove "again".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wanted to say :


I wanted to say :

I wanted to say (the following):

-1- My friend is a faillure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-2- I gave up in him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.


-2- I gave up ion him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.

-2- I gave up ion him for a while because I had failled so many times😥😥😥.

You're doing so well now!

( I am sorry this topic hurts me a lot. I want to turn this page. )


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

( I am sorry but this topic hurts me a lot. I want to turn this page. )

Understandably so!

Now, my friends I hope to understand what I wanted to say.


Now, myI hope friends I hope to understandsee what I wanted to say.

"See" works better in this context.

Now, I hope my friends I hope to understand what I wanted to say.

Yes!

I had an enemy his name was the failure but since 2017 I had felt have become a woman more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!


I had an enemy; his name was the failure, but since 2017 I had felt that I have become a woman more confident woman, so today I can say I am proud of myself!

When you say "His name was the failure" it makes it seem like his name is "the failure".

I had an enemy his namand he was thea failure but, since 2017, I had feltfeel I have become a woman who's more confident so today I can say I am proud of myself!

Yay!

Yes, the door of success is open to me.


Yes, tThe door of success is open to me.

"Yes" seems out of place to me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Again praise be to God!


Again, praise be to God!

Again, praise be to God!

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