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courageuse19

April 13, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 194

Today is day 194 of my daily English writing challenge. Today , I went to find the solution of internet , but I attemps failed. I know every problem have a solution. Anyway, on Monday I'll go to telecom commercial agency to find a solution.

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Writing Challenge, Day 194

Today is day 194 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today , I went to find thea solution ofto my internet problem, but I(my attempsts) failed.

or,

Today, I went to find a solution to my internet problem, but couldn't.

I know every problem haves a solution.

"it has"

I agree with you.

Anyway, on Monday I'll go to the telecom commercial agency to find a solution.

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Good for you! Good luck and, again, well written!

Writing Challenge, Day 194

Today is day 194 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today , I went on the Internet to find thea solution of internet , but Imy attempts failed.

The way you wrote "I went to find the solution of internet" makes it seem like you were trying to fix something about the internet.

I know every problem haves a solution.

Anyway, on Monday I'll go to tTelecom's commercial agency to find a solution.

Company names are capitalized.

Feedback

Keep it up! Also, hope your problem will be fixed.

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trish77857

April 14, 2023

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Today , I went on the Internet to find thea solution of internet , but Imy attempts failed.

Just thought I'd leave a comment saying that mari's correction for this part is right. I misinterpreted what you meant originally, so ignore my correction for this part.

Writing Challenge, Day 194


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Today is day 194 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today , I went to find the solution of internet , but I attemps failed.


Today , I went on the Internet to find thea solution of internet , but Imy attempts failed.

The way you wrote "I went to find the solution of internet" makes it seem like you were trying to fix something about the internet.

Today , I went to find thea solution ofto my internet problem, but I(my attempsts) failed.

or, Today, I went to find a solution to my internet problem, but couldn't.

I know every problem have a solution.


I know every problem haves a solution.

I know every problem haves a solution.

"it has" I agree with you.

Anyway, on Monday I'll go to telecom commercial agency to find a solution.


Anyway, on Monday I'll go to tTelecom's commercial agency to find a solution.

Company names are capitalized.

Anyway, on Monday I'll go to the telecom commercial agency to find a solution.

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