April 11, 2023
Today is day 192 of my daily English writing challenge. Yesterday , I spoke with my friend over Skype but we could not hear each other because the internet was so bad. But my friend thought that my earphones did not work despite it new.
Despite this problem, we spoke by writting down our conversation or during our one hour session.
I have to fix the problem of my internet. Before I had one but it became very expensive. That's why I am forced to find another solution soon.
Writing Challenge, Day 162
Today is day 192 of my daily English writing challenge.
Yesterday , I spoke with my friend over Skype but we could not hear each other because the internet connection was so bad.
But my My friend thought that my earphones did not work despite itthough they are new.
or,
At first my friend thought that my earphones did not work though they are new.
Despite this problem, we spoke by writting down our conversation or during our one hour session.
or,
Despite this problem, we spoke by writing down our conversation throughout our one hour session.
I have to fix the problem of my internet.
or, more commonly said in the US,
I have to fix my internet problem.
Before I had onI had a good connection before but it became very expensive.
That's why I am forced to find another solution soon.
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I'm sorry to hear that you're still having problems with your internet connection. I hope you find a solution soon! Also, very nice writing!
Writing Challenge, Day 162
Today is day 192 of my daily English writing challenge.
Yesterday , I spoke with my friend over Skype, but we could not hear each other because the internet was so bad.
ButHowever, my friend thought that my earphones did not work despite ithem being new.
Substituted "however" to prevent repeating repeating "but"
Earphones are plural, thus "them"; also "despite" requires you use another verb or gerund: "despite them being new" or "despite that they were new" (I prefer the first option though)
DespiteRegardless of this problem, we spokewere able to speak by writting down our conversation or (missing word here?) during our one hour session.
Substituted "regardless of" to prevent repeating repeating "despite"
"Regardless of this problem, we spoke" is grammatical, but I feel like the addition of "were able to speak" improves the logical flow of the argument: you weren't able to communicate before, now you are
I have to fix the problem ofwith my internet.
Before I had one butI had a similar issue in the past and it became very expensive.
That's why I amwill be forced to find another solution soon.
Writing Challenge, Day 162 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Today is day 192 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Yesterday , I spoke with my friend over Skype but we could not hear each other because the internet was so bad. Yesterday Yesterday |
But my friend thought that my earphones did not work despite it new.
Substituted "however" to prevent repeating repeating "but" Earphones are plural, thus "them"; also "despite" requires you use another verb or gerund: "despite them being new" or "despite that they were new" (I prefer the first option though)
or, At first my friend thought that my earphones did not work though they are new. |
Despite this problem, we spoke by writting down our conversation or during our one hour session.
Substituted "regardless of" to prevent repeating repeating "despite" "Regardless of this problem, we spoke" is grammatical, but I feel like the addition of "were able to speak" improves the logical flow of the argument: you weren't able to communicate before, now you are Despite this problem, we spoke by writ or, Despite this problem, we spoke by writing down our conversation throughout our one hour session. |
I have to fix the problem of my internet. I have to fix the problem I have to fix the problem of my internet. or, more commonly said in the US, I have to fix my internet problem. |
Before I had one but it became very expensive.
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That's why I am forced to find another solution soon. That's why I This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Writing Challenge, Day 192 |
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