March 11, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 161
Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge. Today is a big challenge I am doing right now. If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal. I could not improve the language.
I decided to post and to add what I want to say. I need to focus more. Go Courageuse19!
This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/
First of all, Forgive me if I bother you to correct me.😊😊
Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe. I have many molds but I prefer to use smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my siter have diabet. I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes.
She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture the way the food was arranged on a plate.we were in agreement on it.
Writing Challenge, Day 161
Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge.
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If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal.
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If I didn't correct all of my mistakes in my journal, I could not improve my use of the language.
I decided to post and tohen add what I want to say.
I need to focus more.
Go Courageuse19, me!
We don't really refer to ourselves in third person in the US but I can refer to you by name.
Yes, go, Courageuse19!
This is mythe journal entry that I posted the last time.: https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/
First of all, Fforgive me if I bother you towhen you correct me.😊😊
There's no need to apologize. That's what we're here for! Besides, I like correcting your journal entries. 😊😊
Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe.
I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my sister have diabetes.
I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and pictures of my recipes from my phone.
She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture the way the food was arranged on a plate.w in one of the pictures. We were in agreement on ithat.
Feedback
I remember this. It's getting better and better all the time! Very nice work!
March 24, 2023
Thank you so much.
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Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today is a big challenge I am doing right nowfor me.
If I didn't correct all of the mistakes on my journal.,
I could not improve themy english language skills.
I decided to post and to add what I want to say.
I need to focus more.
Go Courageuse19!
This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/
First of all, Fforgive me if I botherwant you to correct me.😊😊
Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe.
I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and also because Mom and my sister have diabetes.
I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes on my phone.
She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture because of the way the food was arranged on a plate.w We were in agreement on it.
Feedback
Great job! If you put your mind to it, you can achieve anything!
March 11, 2023
I owe you one!
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Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is a big challenge I am doing right now. Today is a big challenge Today |
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If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal. If I didn't correct all of the mistakes on my journal
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I could not improve the language. I could not improve If I didn't correct all of my mistakes in my journal, I could not improve my use of the language. |
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I decided to post and to add what I want to say. I decided to post I decided to post and t |
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I need to focus more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Go Courageuse19! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Go We don't really refer to ourselves in third person in the US but I can refer to you by name. Yes, go, Courageuse19! |
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This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/ This sentence has been marked as perfect! This is |
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First of all, Forgive me if I bother you to correct me.😊😊 First of all, First of all, There's no need to apologize. That's what we're here for! Besides, I like correcting your journal entries. 😊😊 |
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Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have many molds but I prefer to use smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my siter have diabet. I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and also because Mom and my sister have diabetes. I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe |
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I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes. I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her |
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She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture the way the food was arranged on a plate.we were in agreement on it. She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like
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