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March 7, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 157

Today is day 156 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I went to my apointment with my Doctor but I didn't find my own Doctor because he came back to his hometown. I was sad about it. Anywhy the new Doctor was kind and he explained my situation and he gave another appointment.

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Today I went tofor my apointment with my Ddoctor but I didn't manage to find my own Ddoctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

Anywhyay, the new Ddoctor was kind and he explained to me my situation and he gave me another appointment.

Writing Challenge, Day 156

Today is day 156 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I went to my appointment withto see my Ddoctor but I didn't find my own Dsee my regular doctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

I'm sorry to that. :/

"To come" and "to go" are determined by where you are. Since you're at the hospital, we say that the doctor "went" back to his hometown. If someone is elsewhere and arriving at the hospital while you're still there, we say some is "coming" to the hospital.

I was sad about it.

Anywhyay, the new Ddoctor was kind and he explained my situation and he gave me another appointment.

That's good!

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I hope everything went well! Terrific work!

Writing Challenge, Day 156

Today is day 156 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I went to myan appointment with my Doctor but I didn't findsee my own Doctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

or "Today I was supposed to have an appointment with my doctor but I didn't (end up) seeing him...."

I was sad about ithat.

Anywhyay, the new Doctor was kind and he explained mythe situation and (he) gave me another appointment.

or "replacement doctor" as I presume you will get your normal doctor back.

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Great writing! :)

I was sad about it.


I was sad about ithat.

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Today I went to my apointment with my Doctor but I didn't find my own Doctor because he came back to his hometown.


Today I went to myan appointment with my Doctor but I didn't findsee my own Doctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

or "Today I was supposed to have an appointment with my doctor but I didn't (end up) seeing him...."

Today I went to my appointment withto see my Ddoctor but I didn't find my own Dsee my regular doctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

I'm sorry to that. :/ "To come" and "to go" are determined by where you are. Since you're at the hospital, we say that the doctor "went" back to his hometown. If someone is elsewhere and arriving at the hospital while you're still there, we say some is "coming" to the hospital.

Today I went tofor my apointment with my Ddoctor but I didn't manage to find my own Ddoctor because he camewent back to his hometown.

Writing Challenge, Day 156


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 156 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anywhy the new Doctor was kind and he explained my situation and he gave another appointment.


Anywhyay, the new Doctor was kind and he explained mythe situation and (he) gave me another appointment.

or "replacement doctor" as I presume you will get your normal doctor back.

Anywhyay, the new Ddoctor was kind and he explained my situation and he gave me another appointment.

That's good!

Anywhyay, the new Ddoctor was kind and he explained to me my situation and he gave me another appointment.

Writing Challenge, Day 157


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