March 1, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 151
Today is day 151 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I filmed two recipes. I was very delighted because my sisters like them!
I also watched more recipes from YouTube and took ideas somehow to use on my own recipes.
Writing Challenge, Day 151
Today is day 151 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed two recipes.
I was very delighted because my sisters like them!
I also watched more recipes fromon YouTube and took ideas somehow to use ongot some ideas for my own recipes.
Good for you!
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How exciting! Good work all around!
March 2, 2023
Thank you so much Mari.
Writing Challenge, Day 151
Today is day 151 of my daily English writing challenge.
Today I filmed two recipes.
The reader might need more clarity such as, “I filmed me making two recipes.”
I was very delighted because my sisters like them!
I also watched more recipes fromon YouTube and took ideas somehowgot some ideas to use onfor my own recipes.
March 2, 2023
Thank you so much.
I was veryquite delighted because my sisters like them!
The words "very" and "delighted" don't usually go together, but I'm not too sure why...
I also watched more recipes from YouTube and took ideas somehowaway some ideas to use on my own recipes.
Feedback
Very good!
March 2, 2023
Thank you so much.
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Today is day 151 of my daily English writing challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I filmed two recipes. Today I filmed two recipes. The reader might need more clarity such as, “I filmed me making two recipes.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was very delighted because my sisters like them! I was The words "very" and "delighted" don't usually go together, but I'm not too sure why... This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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