Feb. 27, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 149
Today is day 149 of my daily English challenge. I want to talk about my aunt. She had never hurts anybody. She was very kind and beautiful woman. Mom said about her sister: She always helped mom when everyone close the door to mom.
My aunt and mom had eaten the bread with water. Because mom was gone through of problems when she was young. My aunt was so kidness with mom.
God bless you my dear aunt 😥😥
Writing Challenge, Day 149
Today is day 149 of my daily English writing challenge.
Make it more direct
I want to talk about my aunt.
She hawould never hurts anybodyone.
She was a very kind and beautiful woman.
My mom said abouthat her sister: She, my aunt, had always helped my mom when everyone close the door to momno one was there for her.
Because mom was goneent through a lot of problems when she was young.
My aunt was so kidness withvery kind to my mom.
God bless you, my dear aunt 😥😥
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Overall not too bad, could be better. I believe in you!!!
Writing Challenge, Day 149
Today is day 149 of my daily English challenge.
I want to talk about my aunt.
She had never hurts anybody.
She was very kind and a beautiful woman.
Mom said this about her sister: She always helped mome even when everyone else closed their door to moms.
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My aunt and mom had eaten the bread with water together because Mom had gone through problems when she was young.
Because mom was gone through of problems when she was young.
My aunt was so kidness with mnd to Mom.
God bless you, my dear aAunt. 😥😥
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I'm so sorry for your and your mom's loss. You honor your aunt very well with this post. May she get all the hugs she wants now.
Writing Challenge, Day 149
Today is day 149 of my daily English challenge.
I want to talk about my aunt.
She had never hurts anybody.
She was very kind and beautiful woman.
Mom said about her sister: She always helped my mom when everyone close the door to my mom.
Because mom washad gone through of problems when she was young.
My aunt was so kindness with mom.
God bless you my dear aunt 😥😥
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I'm really sorry for your loss. May your aunt rest in peace. She sounded like an incredible person.
Writing Challenge, Day 149
Today is day 149 of my daily English challenge.
I want to talk about my aunt.
She had never hurts anybody.
She was a very kind and beautiful woman.
My mom said about her sister: "She always helped mome when everyone else had closed the door to momon me".
My aunt and mom had eaten the bread with water.
Because mom washad gone through of problems when she was young.
My aunt was so kindness with mom.
God bless you my dear aunt 😥😥
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Some lovely writing today.
Feb. 27, 2023
My aunt was so kindness with mom.
Shouldn't it be : "My aunt was so kind to my mom" ?
Feb. 28, 2023
Shouldn't it be : "My aunt was so kind to my mom" ?
Strictly, probably.
They both sound right to me. I might even default to "kind to".
Although "kind with" evokes a feeling of compassion and 'looking after', which I think fits this context. That's probably because you might describe someone who looks after a troubled relative as being "kind and patient with them". Maybe it's a bit more poetic than grammatical!
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