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courageuse19

Feb. 26, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 148

Today is day 148 of my daily English challenge. Today I went out with my mother to the supermarket to buy what we needed. After coming back, I coocked. In the afternoon, mom recieved call from her nice to tell her sister dead today. Mom si so sad about her older sister.😥😥

Therefore I could not celebratemy sister's birthday.

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Writing Challenge, Day 148

Today is day 148 of my daily English challenge.

Today I went out with my mother to the supermarket to buy what we needed.

After coming back home, I coocked.

In the afternoon, mMom recieived a call from her niece to tellwho said that her sister diead today.

ohh, no! I'm so sorry to hear this. Big hugs to you and your mom!

Mom sis so sad about her older sister.😥😥

More big hugs to your mom!

Therefore, I could not celebrate my sister's birthday.

oh, I'm so sorry to hear this, too. Big hugs to your sister, too!

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What a rough day. I hope the memories of your aunt fill you with warmth and joy. I'd give you all the hugs you want if I could.

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courageuse19

Feb. 27, 2023

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May Allah/ God to bless you!
What a wonderful woman you are Mari!

Thank you so much.

Today is day 148 of my daily English challenge.

Today I went out with my mother to the supermarket to buy what we needed.

After coming back, I coocked.

In the afternoon, mom recieved call from her niece to telling her that her sister dead today.

Mom wasi so sad about her older sister.😥😥

Therefore I could not celebrate my sister's birthday.

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Sorry for your mother's loss.

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courageuse19

Feb. 27, 2023

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Not Mom. It was my aunt.

Thank you so much.

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ashlynn1257

Feb. 28, 2023

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Not Mom. It was my aunt. Thank you so much.

I meant that your mother lost her sister (your aunt). And you are welcome.

Writing Challenge, Day 148


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Today is day 148 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I went out with my mother to the supermarket to buy what we needed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After coming back, I coocked.


After coming back, I coocked.

After coming back home, I coocked.

In the afternoon, mom recieved call from her nice to tell her sister dead today.


In the afternoon, mom recieved call from her niece to telling her that her sister dead today.

In the afternoon, mMom recieived a call from her niece to tellwho said that her sister diead today.

ohh, no! I'm so sorry to hear this. Big hugs to you and your mom!

Mom si so sad about her older sister.😥😥


Mom wasi so sad about her older sister.😥😥

Mom sis so sad about her older sister.😥😥

More big hugs to your mom!

Therefore I could not celebratemy sister's birthday.


Therefore I could not celebrate my sister's birthday.

Therefore, I could not celebrate my sister's birthday.

oh, I'm so sorry to hear this, too. Big hugs to your sister, too!

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