Feb. 25, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 147
Today is day 147 of my daily English challenge.Today I did not able to do anything because I was very tired. Tomorrow I will do many things because it would be my birthday's sister and I would like to bake a cake and cook a especial recipe for her.๐๐
Today is day 147 of my daily English challenge.Today I didwas not able to do anything because I was very tired.
Tomorrow I will do many things because it wouldill be my birthday's sistersisterโs birthday and I would like to bake a cake and cook a especial recipe for her.๐๐
Today is day 147 of my daily English challenge. Today I didwas not able to do anything because I was very tired.
Tomorrow I will do many things because it wouldill be my birthday's sistersister's birthday, and I wouldill like to bake a cake and cook a especial recipe for her.๐๐
Writing Challenge, Day 147
Today is day 147 of my daily English challenge. Today I didwas not able to do anything because I was very tired.
Tomorrow I will do many things because it wouldill be my birthday's sister andsister's birthday so I would like to bake a cake and cook an extra special recipe for her.๐๐
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Very nice! Happy Birthday to your sister!
Today is day 147 of my daily English challenge. Today I didwas not able to do anything because I was very tired.
Tomorrow I will do many things because it wouldill be my birthday's sistersister's birthday and I would like to bake a cake and cook a especial recipe for her.๐๐
It is a little awkward to say "I will do many things." It would be better to say, "Tomorrow I have a lot to do" or "Tomorrow I will do a lot". Also, your sentence is too long. With the corrections above it could be "Tomorrow I will do many things because it will be my sister's birthday. I would like to bake a cake and cook a special recipe for her.๐๐"
March 1, 2023
Thank you so much
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Tomorrow I will do many things because it would be my birthday's sister and I would like to bake a cake and cook a especial recipe for her.๐๐ Tomorrow I will do many things because it w It is a little awkward to say "I will do many things." It would be better to say, "Tomorrow I have a lot to do" or "Tomorrow I will do a lot". Also, your sentence is too long. With the corrections above it could be "Tomorrow I will do many things because it will be my sister's birthday. I would like to bake a cake and cook a special recipe for her.๐๐" Tomorrow I will do many things because it w Tomorrow I will do many things because it w Tomorrow I will do many things because it w |
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