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courageuse19

Feb. 23, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 145

Today is day 145 of my daily English challenge. In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ; I still have a toothache. She said me to have to continue take two types of medicine. If I'll be fine untill on Startuday. I have to go to the dentist.

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In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ;: I still have a toothache.

She said me tothat I have to continue to take two types of medicine.

You can use “to take” or “taking” in this instance.

If I'll be fine untill on Star Saturday.

This sentence and the lady sentence don’t make much sense. It might be easier to combine the two. An example of this could be:
“I’ll be fine until Saturday when I have to go back to the dentist.”

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This was good, nice job!

Today is day 145 of my daily English challenge.

She said me toI have to continue takeing two types of medicine.

You do not need to add a "me" or "to" before the "have", just the letter "I"

If I'll bem fine untill on Staraturday.

1. "Until" is spelled with one L.
2. "until" doesn't fit the sentence or story. Also, you cannot use "until" and "on" right after each other. You would either say "until Saturday" or "on Saturday". But using "until" would not be the right usage in this context.
3. "If I'll be" is not correct, you would say "If I'm fine".
4. Lastly, it's spelled Saturday, with no "t" before the S, a "t" after the first "a", and the "r" after the "u".

I have to go to the dentist.

This is a grammatically correct sentence, but the usage isn't right. If you're fine on Saturday, you do not need to go back to the dentist, right?

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But honestly, this is very good, especially if it's only your 145th day. If you went somewhere where you need to speak English, I think you should be comfortable.

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courageuse19

March 1, 2023

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If I'll bem fine untill on Staraturday.

Interesting!

Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 145

Today is day 145 of my daily English challenge.

In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ;: I still have a toothache.

She said me tothat I have to continue takeing two types of medicine.

IfThen I'll be fine untill on Star Saturday when I have to go to the dentist.

I have to go to the dentist.

This kind of didn't make sense to me so I added it to the previous line.

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Good work and I hope you feel better soon!

Writing Challenge, Day 145

Today is dDay 145 of my daily English challenge.

since it's a specific day, I think it makes sense to capitalize

In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ; I still have a toothache.

She said me toI have to continue take two types of medicine.

If I'll be fine untill on Startuday.

Writing Challenge, Day 145


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 145 of my daily English challenge.


Today is dDay 145 of my daily English challenge.

since it's a specific day, I think it makes sense to capitalize

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ; I still have a toothache.


In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ; I still have a toothache.

In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ;: I still have a toothache.

In the afternoon I called the dentist to tell her about my situation ;: I still have a toothache.

She said me to have to continue take two types of medicine.


She said me toI have to continue take two types of medicine.

She said me tothat I have to continue takeing two types of medicine.

She said me toI have to continue takeing two types of medicine.

You do not need to add a "me" or "to" before the "have", just the letter "I"

She said me tothat I have to continue to take two types of medicine.

You can use “to take” or “taking” in this instance.

If I'll be fine untill on Startuday.


If I'll be fine untill on Startuday.

IfThen I'll be fine untill on Star Saturday when I have to go to the dentist.

If I'll bem fine untill on Staraturday.

1. "Until" is spelled with one L. 2. "until" doesn't fit the sentence or story. Also, you cannot use "until" and "on" right after each other. You would either say "until Saturday" or "on Saturday". But using "until" would not be the right usage in this context. 3. "If I'll be" is not correct, you would say "If I'm fine". 4. Lastly, it's spelled Saturday, with no "t" before the S, a "t" after the first "a", and the "r" after the "u".

If I'll be fine untill on Star Saturday.

This sentence and the lady sentence don’t make much sense. It might be easier to combine the two. An example of this could be: “I’ll be fine until Saturday when I have to go back to the dentist.”

I have to go to the dentist.


I have to go to the dentist.

This kind of didn't make sense to me so I added it to the previous line.

I have to go to the dentist.

This is a grammatically correct sentence, but the usage isn't right. If you're fine on Saturday, you do not need to go back to the dentist, right?

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