Feb. 16, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 138
Today is day 138 of my daily English challenge. Today I had been a busy day. My mom and I went out to buy vegetables, milk, sugar...etc. After came back at home, I cooked and cleaned the kitchen.
In the afternoon, I went to the dentiste. I was very affraid but she was very kind to me. Everything was fine. The dentiste gave me another appointment.😊😊
Right now, I am feeling very tired. I want to sleep.
Writing Challenge, Day 138
Today is day 138 of my daily English challenge.
Today I had been a busy day.
My mom and I went out to buy vegetables, milk, sugar...etc, etcetera.
Etc. is an abbreviation so need the period after it. However, since you are ending the sentence on it, I would write the full word to avoid any awkwardness
After I came back at home, I cooked and cleaned the kitchen.
In the afternoon, I went to the dentiste.
I was very affraid, but she was very kind to me.
Everything was fine.
The dentiste gave me another appointment.😊😊
Right now, I am feeling very tired.
I want to sleep.
Feedback
Great job
Feb. 18, 2023
Thank you so much.
Writing Challenge, Day 138
Today is day 138 of my daily English challenge.
Today I had been a busy day.
My mom and I went out to buy vegetables, milk, sugar..., etc.
After we came back at home, I cooked and cleaned the kitchen.
or.
After coming back home, I cooked and cleaned the kitchen.
In the afternoon, I went to the dentiste.
I was very affraid but she was very kind to me.
Yay!
Everything was fine.
The dentiste gave me another appointment.😊😊
Right now, I am feeling very tired.
I want to sleep.
Feedback
Rest well! You deserve it! Good work!
Feb. 17, 2023
Thank you so much.
Writing Challenge, Day 138
Today is day 138 of my daily English challenge.
Today I had been a busy day.
Or: Today has been a busy day.
My mom and I went out to buy vegetables, milk, sugar..., etc.
After we came back at home, I cooked and cleaned the kitchen.
In the afternoon, I went to the dentiste.
I was very affraid but she was very kind to me.
Everything was fine.
The dentiste gave me another appointment.😊😊
Right now, I am feeling very tired.
I want to sleep.
Feedback
Great writing. Sounds like a busy day.
I, also, do not like dentists!
Feb. 16, 2023
Thank you so much 😊
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