Writing Challenge: Day, 136

Today I choose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not have much of a vocabulary.

You could also say "I do not have a very big vocabulary."

I want to write to my friend an email to give him my advice and support him. I hope everybody to understands me.

I don't to talk to you of the name religion but I want to talk to you of the name humanity.

I want to be sure I understand what you are trying to say before I correct this...you don't want to talk to him in the name of religion, but in the name of humanity? Something like that?

Theyre are two differents kinds of women. One woman guides one down the right path, and the other guides him through Hell.

I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and you are a man of high morals... so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problem occurs, be patient.

Remember that we are guests on this earth.

And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, which I consider like my mother, I will take care of I will take care of her like she is my own mother.

Writing Challenge Day, 136

Today I choose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not much ofhave a very big vocabulary.

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I don't want to talk to you of the nameabout religion but I want to talk to you of the nameabout humanity.

They are two differents women.One woman guides on beings. One guides someone down the right path, and the other guides hithem through Hell.

I like the metaphor of religion and humanity guiding people down paths, though it may sound better to refer to them as “beings” rather than women.

I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... r Remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and I know you are a man of high morals..., so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problems occurs, be patient.

In English, we often don’t use multiple ellipsis (“…”) in one sentence.

Remember that we are guests on ethis Earth.

I know that it’s a bit strange to put “this “ before Earth because there’s only one Earth, but in sentences like yours, people often do refer to it as “this Earth”.

And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, whicho I consider like my own mother, I will take care of her.

“which” means you’re referring to the mother’s life
“who” means you’re referring to the mother (as a person)