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courageuse19

Feb. 7, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 129

Today is day 129 of my daily English challenge. Five days ago, my friend didn't send me an email. That's why I felt he is not good. Today, he had send an email that told me he was not doing well.

Today I baked two sweets. My family liked them! I am really happy to take care of my family and especially Mom.

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Writing Challenge, Day 129

Today is day 129 of my daily English challenge.

Five days ago, my friend didn't send me an email.

That's why I felt he is not goodsomething might be wrong.

or

That's why I thought something might be wrong.

Today, he had sendt an email that told mesaid he was not doing well.

I hope he gets better soon!

Today I baked two sweets.

My family liked them!

I am really happy to take care of my family and especially Mom.

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Yay for everyone! \o/ I'm not surprised in the least that they liked your sweets. ^^ Good work!

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courageuse19

Feb. 8, 2023

2

Thank you so much for your compliment!

Writing Challenge, Day 129

Today is day 129 of my daily English challenge.

Five days ago, my friend didn't send me an email.

That's why I felt he iwas not goodwell.

Today, he had sendt an email that told me he was not doing well.

Some people would say you need a comma after "Today", but I also see other people omit it for single words.

Today I baked two sweets.

My family liked them!

I am really happy to take care of my family and especially Mom.

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courageuse19

Feb. 8, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 129


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Today is day 129 of my daily English challenge.


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Five days ago, my friend didn't send me an email.


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That's why I felt he is not good.


That's why I felt he iwas not goodwell.

That's why I felt he is not goodsomething might be wrong.

or That's why I thought something might be wrong.

Today, he had send an email that told me he was not doing well.


Today, he had sendt an email that told me he was not doing well.

Some people would say you need a comma after "Today", but I also see other people omit it for single words.

Today, he had sendt an email that told mesaid he was not doing well.

I hope he gets better soon!

Today I baked two sweets.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My family liked them!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am really happy to take care of my family and especially Mom.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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