Feb. 5, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 127
Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge. Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients. It was very delicious.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
Tomorrow, I will be baking a sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with alsowith different decorations.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
Feb. 6, 2023
Thank you.
Writing Challenge, Day 127
Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.
Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.
It was very delicious.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especialalso, more importantly, with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
Yum!
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Your posts have been sounding so yummy lately! Good work!
Feb. 6, 2023
Thank you so much Mari. You're so kind with me๐๐
Writing Challenge, Day 127
Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.
Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.
It was very delicious.
Someone else said to change very to really. I think in this case either word works so you don't really have to make that correction. This sentence would be good as it is.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
You just added too many words. You can omit most of what was written and just say " with different ingredients ad decorations". You don't have to say " with different" twice because its already implied if you put decorations after"and" that the decorations will be different too.
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This is well written. Keep learning/ practicing and good luck!
Feb. 6, 2023
It was very delicious.
Thank you so much. I don't understand what did you mean on this sentence.
Also: It was verreally delicious.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
....with various ingredients and various decorations. I can't wait.
Feb. 6, 2023
Thank you so much.
Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.
Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.
It was very delicious.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and, especially with also different decorations.๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
Feb. 6, 2023
Thank you.
Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.s. ๐๐ I can't wait to do it!
Since there are multiple decorations u need to make it plural. I deleted the word โalsoโ because it felt redundant with the sentence.
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Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was very delicious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Also: It was It was very delicious. Someone else said to change very to really. I think in this case either word works so you don't really have to make that correction. This sentence would be good as it is. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with Since there are multiple decorations u need to make it plural. I deleted the word โalsoโ because it felt redundant with the sentence. Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐๐ I can't wait to do it! ....with various ingredients and various decorations. I can't wait. Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and You just added too many words. You can omit most of what was written and just say " with different ingredients ad decorations". You don't have to say " with different" twice because its already implied if you put decorations after"and" that the decorations will be different too. Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and Yum! Tomorrow, I will be baking a sweet dough with different ingredients and |
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