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courageuse19

Feb. 1, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 123

Today is Day 123 of my daily English challenge. Today I had a busy day. I filmed three recipes again but I cancled one, because I didn't like it! I have to make it again later.

My recipes was so delicious! Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, eggs. I would like to cook with fresh vegetables.

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Writing Challenge, Day 123

Today is Day 123 of my daily English challenge.

Today I had a busy day.

I filmed three recipes again but I cancldeleted one, because I didn't like it!

I think you mean you deleted the file but I could be wrong.

I have to make it again later.

My recipes wasere so delicious!

verb agreement

Yum!

Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, and eggs.

I would like to cook with fresh vegetables.

Feedback

You really know how to cook! Thank you for taking the effort to share your skills with the world! Good work!

Also, I wrote this with you and some others in mind: https://langcorrect.com/journal/no-206-langcorrect%E3%81%AE%E8%8B%B1%E8%AA%9E%E3%81%AE%E5%AD%A6%E7%BF%92%E8%80%85%E3%81%B8-1/

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courageuse19

Feb. 2, 2023

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https://langcorrect.com/journal/no-206-langcorrect%E3%81%AE%E8%8B%B1%E8%AA%9E%E3%81%AE%E5%AD%A6%E7%BF%92%E8%80%85%E3%81%B8-1/
Yes, I love to cook...I try to cook some recipes from around the world.
I wrote you a comment..😉😊😊😊😊😊😊

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courageuse19

Feb. 11, 2023

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I filmed three recipes again but I cancldeleted one, because I didn't like it!

Hi Mari!
I was mean " I filmed....but I deleted one video"

Thank you.

Today is Day 123 of my daily English challenge.

Today I had a busy day.

I filmed three recipes again but I canceled one, because I didn't like it!

I have to make it again later.

My recipes was so delicious!

Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, and eggs.

If you are using a comma for a list, the list should have at least 3 items. For example, you could say, "I am buying vegetables, meat, and eggs."

I would like to cook with fresh vegetables.

Feedback

I hope your recipes are yummy. Keep up the great work!

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courageuse19

Feb. 2, 2023

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Thank you so much for your helping me and your beautiful words!

Writing Challenge, Day 123


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Today is Day 123 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I had a busy day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I filmed three recipes again but I cancled one, because I didn't like it!


I filmed three recipes again but I canceled one, because I didn't like it!

I filmed three recipes again but I cancldeleted one, because I didn't like it!

I think you mean you deleted the file but I could be wrong.

I have to make it again later.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My recipes was so delicious!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My recipes wasere so delicious!

verb agreement Yum!

Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, eggs.


Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, and eggs.

If you are using a comma for a list, the list should have at least 3 items. For example, you could say, "I am buying vegetables, meat, and eggs."

Tomorrow I will be buying some vegetables, and eggs.

I would like to cook with fresh vegetables.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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