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courageuse19

Jan. 28, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 119

Today is day 119 of my daily English challenge. Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe. I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.

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Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Writing Challenge, Day 119

Today is day 119 of my daily English challenge.

Today I felt so tired so that is why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

I hope you feel better soon!

Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe.

I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.

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Yay! My best to you! Terrific writing!

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courageuse19

Jan. 29, 2023

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Mari, I see I am still make of mistakes.

Thank you so much you're support me.

Writing Challenge, Day 119

Today is dDay 119 of my daily English challenge.

In this case "Day 119" is almost like a name. Otherwise you could write "the 119th day"

Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Alternatively you could write: "today I felt so tired. That's why I had to cancel..."

Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe.

I am so excieted to see my successes in sooner.

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courageuse19

Jan. 29, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

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Writing Challenge, Day 119

Today is day 119 of my daily English challenge.

Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe.

sounds more natural since its already a given that it will be video

I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.

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fantastic!

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courageuse19

Jan. 29, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 119


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Today is day 119 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is dDay 119 of my daily English challenge.

In this case "Day 119" is almost like a name. Otherwise you could write "the 119th day"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.


Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Alternatively you could write: "today I felt so tired. That's why I had to cancel..."

Today I felt so tired so that is why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

I hope you feel better soon!

Today I felt so tired that why I had to cancel my conversation with a friend over Skype.

Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe.


Tomorrow I will be filming another video recipe.

sounds more natural since its already a given that it will be video

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.


I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.

I am so excieted to see my successes in sooner.

I am so excieted to see my succeses in sooner.

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