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Writing Challenge, Day 114

Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge. Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstanding. Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.

This is my sentence of yesterday.'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.' So, I want to say: I promise myself to take care of her( my mother) and I won't let her do anything.

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Writing Challenge, Day 114

Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.

Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

'"I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'"

We use double quotation marks with the initial quotation.

So, I want to say:, I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.

oh, that's what I thought you meant so that's how I corrected it. :)

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Good work!

Writing Challenge, Day 114

Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I thinkbelieve that it was misunderstandingood by many/was commonly misunderstood.

Of course, it was my fault the fault was mine because I am still not able to express what I wantexactly what it is that I’d like to say.

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

'I promised myself tohat I would take care of my mother, and that I wouldn’t she do anything.'let her even lift a finger.’

C1 phrasing, conveys your intent (you are doing everything for her so she does not have to exert herself physically to perform tasks for herself physically, this is my interpretation).

So, what I wanted to say was: I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.to not allow her to exert herself in any way.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstandingood.

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'

'I promise myself that I will take good care of her and I won't let her lift a finger.'
Maybe this is a better way of saying the expression?

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There is definitely nothing wrong with the expression. You helping your mother would probably be the best thing you can do for her :) You are doing amazing.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.

This iwas my sentence ofrom yesterday.:

'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'

I haven't corrected this one as I guess it is a direct quote, but have proposed a way to rephrase it below :)

So, Iwhat I really wanted to say is: I promised myself tohat I would take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.

Feedback

It's frustrating when you aren't able to get your point across, but keep working on it! 114 days of writing is really impressive.

So, I want to say: I promise myself to take care of her( my mother) and I won't let her do anything.


So, Iwhat I really wanted to say is: I promised myself tohat I would take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.

So, what I wanted to say was: I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.to not allow her to exert herself in any way.

So, I want to say:, I promised myself to take care of her( (my mother) and I won't let her do anything.

oh, that's what I thought you meant so that's how I corrected it. :)

Writing Challenge, Day 114


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 114 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstanding.


Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think it was misunderstandingood.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I thinkbelieve that it was misunderstandingood by many/was commonly misunderstood.

Yesterday, I posted a sentence and I think ithere was a misunderstanding.

Of course, it was my fault because I am still not able to express what I want to say.


Of course, it was my fault the fault was mine because I am still not able to express what I wantexactly what it is that I’d like to say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is my sentence of yesterday.


This iwas my sentence ofrom yesterday.:

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

This is my sentence ofrom yesterday.

'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'


'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'

I haven't corrected this one as I guess it is a direct quote, but have proposed a way to rephrase it below :)

'I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'

'I promise myself that I will take good care of her and I won't let her lift a finger.' Maybe this is a better way of saying the expression?

'I promised myself tohat I would take care of my mother, and that I wouldn’t she do anything.'let her even lift a finger.’

C1 phrasing, conveys your intent (you are doing everything for her so she does not have to exert herself physically to perform tasks for herself physically, this is my interpretation).

'"I promise myself to take care of her and I won’t she do anything.'"

We use double quotation marks with the initial quotation.

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