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Writing Challenge, Day 112

Today is day 112 of my daily English challenge. Today,I heard a good news about my sister-in law. I hope she returns soon.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend. I was happy to correct my mistakes.

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Writing Challenge, Day 112

Today, I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

I hope she returns soon.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

I was happy to correct my mistakes.

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Good work!

Today, I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

You can also say "I heard some good news"

Yesterday, I learnted how to pronounce likethese words: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

Writing Challenge, Day 112

Today is day 112 of my daily English challenge.

Today,I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

'a' before 'good news' is unnecessary.

I hope she returns soon.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce words like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

Specifying that you learned words helps make the sentence clear.

I was happy to correct my mistakes.

Sorry, I'm not exactly sure what you mean by this sentence. If you were happy that someone corrected your sentences, it would be better to say, "I was happy to have my mistakes corrected." Otherwise, I'm not sure how to correct this.

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This was really good overall! Please keep it up!

Writing Challenge, Day 112

Today is day 112 of my daily English challenge.

Today, I heard asome good news about my sister-in -law.

I hope she returns soon.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

I was happy to correct my mistakes.

Writing Challenge, Day 112


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Today is day 112 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Today,I heard a good news about my sister-in law.


Today, I heard asome good news about my sister-in -law.

Today,I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

'a' before 'good news' is unnecessary.

Today, I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

You can also say "I heard some good news"

Today, I heard a good news about my sister-in law.

I hope she returns soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.


Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce words like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

Specifying that you learned words helps make the sentence clear.

Yesterday, I learnted how to pronounce likethese words: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

Yesterday, I learnt how to pronounce like: his, here, hear, attend and to spend.

I was happy to correct my mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was happy to correct my mistakes.

Sorry, I'm not exactly sure what you mean by this sentence. If you were happy that someone corrected your sentences, it would be better to say, "I was happy to have my mistakes corrected." Otherwise, I'm not sure how to correct this.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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