Jan. 19, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 110
Today is day 110 of my daily English challenge. Today I spoke with my best friend from Columbia. We were talking for a long hours. He showed his an appartement who lives and expressed to me his concerns. I am gratful to God to have him in my life.
Writing Challenge, Day 110
Today is day 110 of my daily English challenge.
Today I spoke with my best friend from Columbia.
We were talkinged for a long hourstime.
or,
We talked for many hours.
He showed his anme the appartement whoere he lives and expressed to me his concerns to me.
I am gratful to God to have him in my life.
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Good work!
We were talking for a longseveral hours.
He showed his an appartement whoere he lives and expressed to me his concerns.
I am grateful to God to have him in my life.
Writing Challenge, Day 110
Today is day 110 of my daily English challenge.
Today I spoke with my best friend from Columbia.
We were talking for a long hourstime.
He showed me his an appartement, whoere he lives, and expressed to me his concerns to me.
The phrase "his apartment, where he lives" while grammatically okay, is a bit redundant. I made the change anyways because it's not uncommon to even hear natives sometimes say a phrase like this despite how "clunky" it is. Plus, I think it still maintains the "vibe" of the original while sounding more natural.
I am grateful to God to have him in my life.
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Congratulations on keeping up with your English challenge for 110 days!
Jan. 20, 2023
Thank you so much.
Today is day 110 of my daily English challenge.
Today, I spoke with my best friend from Columbia.
We were talking for a longmany hours.
He showed his anme the appartement whothat he lives in and expressed to me his concerns.
I am grateful to God tofor haveing him in my life.
I would write this as: "I am (so) grateful that God has blessed me with such a great friend."
Jan. 20, 2023
Thank you so much.
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