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courageuse19

Jan. 16, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 107

Today is day 107 of my daily English challenge. Yesterday I filmed my video recipes but when I wanted to edit it. I noticed I lack photograpy techniques.

Today I was to film other video but my new phone can't work. That reason I had to pick my phone to the shop for fix it.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊

I spoke to myself : I am a good person I deserve a good things not bad. I know like Greman saying: " Beginning may make a good ending."

I know tomorrow will be good and my day.

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Writing Challenge, Day 107

Today is day 107 of my daily English challenge.

Yesterday I filmed my video recipes but, when I wanted to edit it, I noticed I lacked photography techniques.

I noticed I lack photograpy techniques.

This should go with the previous line.

Today I was to film another video but my new phone cadoesn't work.

Thate reason I had to pick up my phone ato the shop for fix itwas to have it fixed.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊

Nice!

I spokeaid to myself :, I am a good person and I deserve a good things, not bad.

I know like Greit's like the German saying:, " BA beginning may make a good ending.

"

I know tomorrow will be good and my day.

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Good for you! Good work!

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courageuse19

Jan. 18, 2023

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Thank you so much.

Yesterday I filmed my video recipe videos but when I waented to edit it.,

I noticed I lackthat I was lacking in photograpy techniqueskills.

Today I was going to film another video but my new phone cawouldn't work.

TFor that reason, I had to picktake my phone to the shop forto fix it.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: for it; I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊

I spokeaid to myself : , "I am a good person I deserve a good things not bad."

I know like GreLike the German saying:, " BThe beginning may make a good ending."

"

I know tomorrow will be good and will be my day.

Feedback

Very good writing.

Sorry for your phone, hope everything will get better soon!

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courageuse19

Jan. 17, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

Writing Challenge, Day 107


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Today is day 107 of my daily English challenge.


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Yesterday I filmed my video recipes but when I wanted to edit it.


Yesterday I filmed my video recipe videos but when I waented to edit it.,

Yesterday I filmed my video recipes but, when I wanted to edit it, I noticed I lacked photography techniques.

I noticed I lack photograpy techniques.


I noticed I lackthat I was lacking in photograpy techniqueskills.

I noticed I lack photograpy techniques.

This should go with the previous line.

Today I was to film other video but my new phone can't work.


Today I was going to film another video but my new phone cawouldn't work.

Today I was to film another video but my new phone cadoesn't work.

That reason I had to pick my phone to the shop for fix it.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊


TFor that reason, I had to picktake my phone to the shop forto fix it.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: for it; I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊

Thate reason I had to pick up my phone ato the shop for fix itwas to have it fixed.😥 I was very sad because I spent a lot of money: I bought a ring light, a tripod stand and microphone.😊😊

Nice!

I spoke to myself : I am a good person I deserve a good things not bad.


I spokeaid to myself : , "I am a good person I deserve a good things not bad."

I spokeaid to myself :, I am a good person and I deserve a good things, not bad.

I know like Greman saying: " Beginning may make a good ending.


I know like GreLike the German saying:, " BThe beginning may make a good ending."

I know like Greit's like the German saying:, " BA beginning may make a good ending.

"


"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know tomorrow will be good and my day.


I know tomorrow will be good and will be my day.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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