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Jan. 14, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 105

Today is day 105 of my daily English challenge. Today my sister was sick. She has a cold. I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but I could not leave my sister without to help her. I took her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe. If she feels good I think she can go work tomorrow.

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Writing Challenge, Day 105

Today is day 105 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister was sick.

She has a cold.

I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but I could not leave my sister without to helping her.

ohh, I'm so sorry to hear that you're still in pain. :(

I tookgave her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe.

What a good sister you are!

If she feels good, I think she can go to work tomorrow.

Your sentence is correct but we more often say it this way in the US.

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Good work! I hope both of you get better very soon!

Writing Challenge, Day 105

Today is day 105 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister was sick.

She has a cold.

could be "Today my sister was sick with a cold."

I had to take care of my sister, even although I a'm in pain but I could not leave my sisther without to helping her.

maybe "I had to take care of my sister. I'm not feeling well, but I couldn't leave her without helping."?

I took her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe.

If she feels good I think she can go work tomorrow.

Feedback

hope you both feel better!

Today is day 105 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister was sick.

She has a cold.

I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but, I could not leave my sister alone without to help her.

I am not too sure about this sentence.

I tookgave her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe for her.

If she feels good later I think she can go work tomorrow.

Writing Challenge, Day 105


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Today is day 105 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today my sister was sick.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She has a cold.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She has a cold.

could be "Today my sister was sick with a cold."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but I could not leave my sister without to help her.


I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but, I could not leave my sister alone without to help her.

I am not too sure about this sentence.

I had to take care of my sister, even although I a'm in pain but I could not leave my sisther without to helping her.

maybe "I had to take care of my sister. I'm not feeling well, but I couldn't leave her without helping."?

I had to take care of my sister, even although I am in pain but I could not leave my sister without to helping her.

ohh, I'm so sorry to hear that you're still in pain. :(

I took her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe.


I tookgave her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe for her.

I took her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe.

I tookgave her a medicine and prepared a hot soupe.

What a good sister you are!

If she feels good I think she can go work tomorrow.


If she feels good later I think she can go work tomorrow.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If she feels good, I think she can go to work tomorrow.

Your sentence is correct but we more often say it this way in the US.

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