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courageuse19

Jan. 13, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 104

Today is day 101 of my daily English challenge. Today my sister arrived from Algiers. I was delighted to see her after two months. She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

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Writing Challenge, Day 104

Today is day 101 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister arrived from Algiers.

It had been 2 months since I’d last seen her, so I was delighted to see her after two monthsgain.

I think it would be nice to expand this a little, like in my suggestion! Another option could be: The last time I saw her was 2 months ago, so I was delighted to see her again.

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

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Hope you enjoy your time with your sister!

Writing Challenge, Day 104

Today is day 101 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister arrived from Algiers.

I was delighted to see her after two months.

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

In the US, we use the word "work" like an uncountable noun sometimes. When we start a new job, we say, "I'm starting work on Sunday."

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Very well written!

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courageuse19

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you Mari. I am in pain. I will write you when I fell better.

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mari

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you Mari. I am in pain. I will write you when I fell better.

I'm so sorry to hear that. I hope you feel better very soon!

Today is day 101 of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister arrived from Algiers.

I was delighted to see her after two months.

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

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courageuse19

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you.

Writing Challenge, Day 104


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Today is day 101 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today my sister arrived from Algiers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was delighted to see her after two months.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It had been 2 months since I’d last seen her, so I was delighted to see her after two monthsgain.

I think it would be nice to expand this a little, like in my suggestion! Another option could be: The last time I saw her was 2 months ago, so I was delighted to see her again.

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

In the US, we use the word "work" like an uncountable noun sometimes. When we start a new job, we say, "I'm starting work on Sunday."

She'll be starting to work on Sunday.

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