Jan. 12, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 103
Today is Day 101 of my daily English challenge. I have just finished my conversation to my best friend over Skype. He can't visit me on March. I am so sad for this bad news. He told that his mother wants to travel or to fly to Columbia on March. She can't travel alone because she's old and sick. I was expect in my friend to come in Algiers to celebrate his birthday with my family but unfortunately my wish didn't achieve. I am so sad. I have to be patient!
Writing Challenge, Day 103
I have just finished mya conversation towith my best friend over Skype.
He can't visit me oin March.
I am so sad forbecause of this bad news.
He told me that his mother wants to travel or to fly to Columbia oin March.
She can't travel alone because she's old and sick.
I was expect ing my friend to come into Algiers to celebrate his birthday with my family but, unfortunately, my wish didn't achievcome true.
I'm sorry to hear this.
I am so sad.
I have to be patient!
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That's the spirit! Good work!
Writing Challenge,: Day 103
Today is Dday 101 of my daily English challenge.
day is not capitalised
I have just/I just finished my conversation towith my best friend over Skype.
although "I have just" is okay, speakers would tend to simply say "I just finished" as this is more natural sounding.
He can't visit me oin March.
use "in march" when referring to anytime during the month. If referring to a specific date like "on March 1"
I am so sad for thise bad news.
He told that his mother wants to travel or /to fly to Coluombia oin March.
same comment about using "in march".
as "to travel" and "to fly" essentially gives the same meaning you don't necessarily need both to sound natural.
Simply say "his mother wants to travel to Colombia in March" or "his mother wants to fly to Colombia in March".
I was expect ing my friend to come into Algiers to celebrate his birthday with my family, but unfortunately my wish didn't achieve.come true
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Just a few simple mistakes but overall well done!
Jan. 12, 2023
Thank you so much.
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Today is Day 101 of my daily English challenge. Today is day is not capitalised |
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I have just finished my conversation to my best friend over Skype. I have just/I just finished my conversation although "I have just" is okay, speakers would tend to simply say "I just finished" as this is more natural sounding. I have just finished |
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He can't visit me on March. He can't visit me use "in march" when referring to anytime during the month. If referring to a specific date like "on March 1" He can't visit me |
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I am so sad for this bad news. I am so sad for th I am so sad |
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He told that his mother wants to travel or to fly to Columbia on March. He told that his mother wants to travel same comment about using "in march". as "to travel" and "to fly" essentially gives the same meaning you don't necessarily need both to sound natural. Simply say "his mother wants to travel to Colombia in March" or "his mother wants to fly to Colombia in March". He told me that his mother wants to travel or |
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She can't travel alone because she's old and sick. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was expect in my friend to come in Algiers to celebrate his birthday with my family but unfortunately my wish didn't achieve. I was expect I was expect I'm sorry to hear this. |
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I am so sad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have to be patient! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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