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Writing Challenge, Day 102

Today is Day 102 of my daily English challenge. Today I went to the shop. I bought the ring light and tripod stand. Then I came back home, I took a rest.

In this evening I have clened the chicken because I will be starting prepare my videos recipes, then to edit them. I hope to achieve my dream.

I will be a bright start and I will make success in may hand. I will also proud of my self soon or later. I am confident this year will be full of my success ; the success is not easy and is not difficult.

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Writing Challenge, Day 102

Today is Day 102 of my daily English challenge.

Today I went to the shop.

I bought thea ring light and a tripod stand.

Then I came back home, I and took a rest.

Remember, we can double the use of the subject "I' in a sentence like this.

In thise evening I have cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my videos recipes, then to. Later I will edit them.

or,

Tonight I cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my video recipes. Later I will edit them.

I hope to achieve my dream.

I will be a bright start and I will makachieve success in mayby my own hand.

Good for you! I like this sentence.

I will also be proud of my self sooner or later.

I am confident this year will be full of my success es; the success is not easy andnor is noit difficult.

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Writing Challenge, Dday 102

Today is Dday 102 of my daily English challenge.

Today I went to the shop.

Most of the time in english, we say "the store".

I bought thea ring light and tripod stand.

Then I came back home, I and took a rest.

In tThis evening, I have cleaned the chicken because I will beam starting to prepare my videos recipes,for my recipe videos then to edit them.

Today is Dday 102 of my daily English challenge.

I would write: "Today is the 102th day of my daily English challenge."

Today I went to thea shop/store.

I bought thea ring light and tripod stand.

Then I came back home, I took aand I got some rest.

In tThis evening, I havewill cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my videos recipes, then toit for my cooking videos. Then, I will edit them.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

I hope to achieve my dream.

I will be a bright start and I will makeam determined to start of with a bang, taking success into may own hands.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

I will also proud ofam sure that I will make my self soon or laterproud in the future.

I am confident this year will be full of my success ; the successas it is not too easy and is notnor too difficult to grasp.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

Then I came back home, I took a rest.


Then I came back home, I took aand I got some rest.

Then I came back home, I and took a rest.

Then I came back home, I and took a rest.

Remember, we can double the use of the subject "I' in a sentence like this.

Writing Challenge, Day 102


Writing Challenge, Dday 102

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Today is Day 102 of my daily English challenge.


Today is Dday 102 of my daily English challenge.

I would write: "Today is the 102th day of my daily English challenge."

Today is Dday 102 of my daily English challenge.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I went to the shop.


Today I went to thea shop/store.

Today I went to the shop.

Most of the time in english, we say "the store".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought the ring light and tripod stand.


I bought thea ring light and tripod stand.

I bought thea ring light and tripod stand.

I bought thea ring light and a tripod stand.

In this evening I have clened the chicken because I will be starting prepare my videos recipes, then to edit them.


In tThis evening, I havewill cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my videos recipes, then toit for my cooking videos. Then, I will edit them.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

In tThis evening, I have cleaned the chicken because I will beam starting to prepare my videos recipes,for my recipe videos then to edit them.

In thise evening I have cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my videos recipes, then to. Later I will edit them.

or, Tonight I cleaned the chicken because I will be starting to prepare my video recipes. Later I will edit them.

I hope to achieve my dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will be a bright start and I will make success in may hand.


I will be a bright start and I will makeam determined to start of with a bang, taking success into may own hands.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

I will be a bright start and I will makachieve success in mayby my own hand.

Good for you! I like this sentence.

I will also proud of my self soon or later.


I will also proud ofam sure that I will make my self soon or laterproud in the future.

I will also be proud of my self sooner or later.

I am confident this year will be full of my success ; the success is not easy and is not difficult.


I am confident this year will be full of my success ; the successas it is not too easy and is notnor too difficult to grasp.

I am not sure what you want to say here.

I am confident this year will be full of my success es; the success is not easy andnor is noit difficult.

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