Jan. 10, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 101
Today is Day 101 of my daily English challenge. Today I called my mother to ask her news, then I told that I went to the dentist and everything is fine with me.
Writing Challenge, Day 101
Today is Day 101 of my daily English challenge.
Today I called my mother to ask her news, thenow she was doing. I told her that I went to the dentist and everything is fine with me.
You almost wrote this correctly. In the US, we don't ask for people's news. Instead, we call to ask how people are doing.
The sentence flow is better if this thought is written in two separate sentences.
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I'm glad to hear everything is alright with your tooth. I forgot to congratulate you on your 100 Day writing streak! Congratulations! Keep up the terrific work!
Jan. 22, 2023
Thank you so much. I appreciate it!
Today, I called my mother to ask her newsif she had any news to share, then I told her that I went to the dentist and everything is fine with mI'm fine.
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Over 100 days of your challenge, wow! That's great :D
Today I called my mother to askcatch up on her news, then I told her that I went to the dentist and that everything is finegoing well with me.
It's a little unnatural to say "ask her news", though it would work informally!
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Today is Day 101 of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I called my mother to ask her news, then I told that I went to the dentist and everything is fine with me. Today I called my mother to It's a little unnatural to say "ask her news", though it would work informally! Today, I called my mother to ask Today I called my mother to ask h You almost wrote this correctly. In the US, we don't ask for people's news. Instead, we call to ask how people are doing. The sentence flow is better if this thought is written in two separate sentences. |
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