I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there.

In the afternoon I went tofor a walk for some of hours, thena few hours and I saw the old woman that. So I gave her some money andto help to her. I promiseasked her to buy some of meats.

I saw on her eyes the happineshappiness in her eyes.

I love to help the people.

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to open my own Cchannel.

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world but I can help some of people.

I have had this dream whensince I was younger.

I am confindent toI will achieve my dreams.

I feel so happy when I help some one.

I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there.

We place "there" or "here" right after "go."

In the afternoon I went to walking for some ofa few hours, and then I saw the old woman thato whom I gaive money andto help to her. I promised her tohat I would buy some of meats.

I saw on her eyes the happiness in her eyes.

I love to help the people.

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to openstart my own Cchannel.

Good for you!

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world but I can help some of the people.

I haved this dream when I was younger.

I am confindent toI can achieve my dream.

Yay you!

I feel so happy when I help some one.

Today is Day 100 of my daily English challenge.

Congratulations!

I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there.

Time information should be placed at the beginning OR at the end of a sentence.

In the afternoon, I went ton a walk for some ofa few hours, t. Then I saw the old woman that I gave money to and help to her.ed. I promised her tohat I would buy some of meats.

“Hours” are a unit of time, which means they can be counted. Therefore, it is more appropriate to say “a few” or “a couple” rather than “some”.

It seems like you want to use the past tense in the second sentence, so I corrected it accordingly.

I saw on her eyes the happiness in her eyes.

Subject + Verb + Object (SVO) is the basic sentence order in English, so: I + saw + the happiness…etc.

I love to help the people.

If you mean this as a habit, “the” is unnecessary.

I love to help people = I love to help anyone

I love to help the people = I love to help specific people, but not everyone

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to openstart my own Cchannel.

As far as I know, people tend to say “start a channel”.
- “Channel” is not a name, it’s a category. You don’t have to capitalize it.

I hope to acheieve my aim.

“I before E except after C.”

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world, but I can help some of people.

I have this dream when I was younger.

Two alternatives:

“I have had this dream since I was young.”

Or:

“I had this dream when I was young (but not anymore).”

I am confindent tohat I can achieve my dream.

I feel so happy when I help some one.

“Someone” is one word.