April 10, 2022
Writing Activity - Letter of Request for Relocation
Dear Sir,
Thank you very much for the help and the opportunity to work with ABC Company. However, due to
long commute, I am spending a large portion of my income just going to work and coming home again. In light of this, I would like to request if I could move/transfer closer to my work. As this would not only save time but also money, which I can use on my parents monthly medications and monthly medical check-up with their doctors. This would also give a big help for me to pay off my loan from the company and also to my family finances, especially now that my family is facing certain health and financial crises.
I would also like to request consideration if I could push back the start date of my employment in Delta City until I pay off all my loans and medical bills of my parents.
Thank you and hoping for your understanding.
Sincerely,
Alexis
my long commute, I am spending a large portion of my income just going to work and coming home again.
In light of this, I would like to request if I could move/transfer closer to my work, as this would not only save time but also money, which I can use on my parents monthly medications and monthly medical check-up with their doctors.
Join the sentence because "as" is a conjunction.
This would also give a big help for mehelp me greatly to pay off my loan from the company and also to my family finances, especially now that my family is facing certain health and financial crises.
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It's really good! Only a few suggestions to improve on.
April 11, 2022
Thank you so much for the correction.
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Reads great to me! Just some very minor corrections
April 10, 2022
Thank you very much for the correction.
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Writing Activity - Letter of Request for Relocation |
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Dear Sir, |
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Thank you very much for the help and the opportunity to work with ABC Company. |
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However, due to |
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long commute, I am spending a large portion of my income just going to work and coming home again. my long commute, I am spending a large portion of my income just going to work and coming home again. my long commute, I am spending a large portion of my income just going to work and coming home again. |
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In light of this, I would like to request if I could move/transfer closer to my work. In light of this, I would like to request if I could move/transfer closer to my work, as this would not only save time but also money, which I can use on my parents monthly medications and monthly medical check-up with their doctors. Join the sentence because "as" is a conjunction. |
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As this would not only save time but also money, which I can use on my parents monthly medications and monthly medical check-up with their doctors. |
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This would also give a big help for me to pay off my loan from the company and also to my family finances, especially now that my family is facing certain health and financial crises. This would also This would also |
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I would also like to request consideration if I could push back the start date of my employment in Delta City until I pay off all my loans and medical bills of my parents. I would also like to request consideration |
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Thank you and hoping for your understanding. |
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Sincerely, |
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Alexis |
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